(19-03-2018, 03:31 PM)dpmangla : Nice Post

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Update 7

Back to earth amongst dear ones – Afzal gets married


Apni zindagi mein Samir kabhi bhi weisa daur se nahin guzra tha. Woh pehli baar thi jab ussko maut saamne dikhaayi diye. Woi zindagi mein pehli baar thi jab ussko kissi ki kami mehsoos hui. Woh pehli baar thi usski zindagi mein jab ussko pyar ki kami mehsoos hui. Woh bhi uss waqt jab ussko laga ke phir kabhi zindagi se mulakaat nahin hogi. Ussko laga ke dobara zameen par nahin jaa paega kabhi. Saagar ki aghosh mein usski jism kissi badi machli ki bhoj ban jaegi. Sab ke sab eise hi soch rahe the jab toofan uss jahaaz ko upar niche kiye jaa raha tha khatarnaak hawaen aur lehron ke beech. Paani jahaaz mein andar guss aaye the aur sabke cabin mein bhi aa chuke the magar draining system kaam kar rahi thi to jitna bhi paani jahaaz ke andar ate the unn mein se 50% drain ho jaata tha turant, magar turant baad lehron ki zor se aur utna paani andar ajata tha.

5 ghanton tak toofan ki khaufnaak aur khatarnaaak lehron ke beech ghire woh jahaaz eisa lag raha tha ke Saagar naraaz thi aur koyi zinda nahin bachne wala. Sab log prayers karne lage, upar wale ko yaad karne ka waqt tha, duaein maangne ka waqt tha, uss kaenaat ko banana wale ke aguey sajde karne ka waqt tha. Captain ek Christian tha aur usski zor se rone ki awaaz sunaayi di gayi, jab baaki ke log dekhne gaye to woh rote hue pray kar raha tha, “O Lord save our ship and the crew and all amidst. You are the saver please accept our prayer, we are sinners we know but you are the most merciful so forgive our sin and spare us from this danger, only you can save us o my Lord save us!”

Kitna bhi kadak insaan ho uss waqt naram ho jata! Donon superiors bhi ro pade aur pray karne lage. Afzal ne zor se pray kiya, “Ya rab hum gunehgaron par rehem kar ey maalik, hamari duaon ko qubool kar hamein bacha ey Khuda, tu hi bachane wala hai, tu maalik hai tu hamein paida karne wala hai, tu ne iss kaenaat ko banaya, weise iss iss toofaan ko bhi ab rokde isse hum bandon par rehem kar ey rab!!”

Samir sar jhukae zameen taak raha tha, enkhon se ensoo behne lage aur usska jism kamp raha tha, sab ke dil zoron se dhadak rahe the, sab bahot darey hue the. Samir ne apne maa baap ko yaad kiya, aur apne chohte bhai aur behen ko yaad karte hue dhire se rote hue kaha, “Hey Bhagwaan mujhe mere maa baap ke liye bacha le, unn logon ko mera sahara hai, weh log mere bagahir kamzor par jaenge, meri maa ro ro ke mar jaegi, mera bhai chohta hai wo mujhpar depend kar raha hai apne studies ke liye aur meri behen bhi….papa thode dinon mein retire hone wale hein to main hi unnka sahara hoon mujhe aur hum sabko bacha le Bhagwaan….” Usske enkhon se eise ensoo behkar zameen par uss samandar ki lehron se mil rahe the jeise koyi chamaatkaar hone wala tha…..woh khud apne ensoowon ko paani mein girta dekh raha tha aur dehek kar rone laga zameen par baith kar…..

Radio kaam nahin kar raha tha koyi toofaan ki khabar nahin mil rahe the….. Assal mein woh toofaan itni tezi ke saath guzar raha tha ke jiss waqt sab pray kar rahe the to toofaan apni aakhri zor par tha, uss waqt toofaan ki rukh mudhkar dusri awr jaa raha tha…..

Ek ghante ke baad aasmaan saaf dikhaayi dene lage halaan ke samundar chanchal tha… hawa bhi tez thi magar toofaani haalat nahin the… lehren tab bhi oonchi thi magar bilkool toofan nahin lag raha tha…..

Captain ne jahaaz start kiya, kuch tehes nehes hua tha, kahin kahin jahaaz damage hue the magar khatra nahin tha….. dhire dhire start kiya aur Jahaaz chalne laga….. door samundar mein toofan dikh rahe the sabko… bhayaanak nazara tha aur rownde khade ho jaate the samundar ke oonche lehron ko dekh kar…. Toofaan Australia ke taraf tezi ke sath badh raha tha uss waqt.

Captain radio se lagaataar contact karta raha aur aakhir mein signal mili aur khabar mili ke jiss latitude par toofaan tha jahaaz ab khatre se baahar tha! Agar woh toofan aur 1 ghate tak Jahaaaz ke beech rehta to zaroor doobo deta jahaaz ko, shukar hai ke tez jaa raha tha toofan aur guzar gaya!



Dusre din sab zameen par ponhuche. Ghar jaane ki sabko jaldi thi aur bina unit par report kiya sabke sab apne apne ghar chale gaye yahan tak ke superiors bhi. Sab itna darre hue the, ke sirf apnon ke beech jaane ka mann thaa aur apne ghar mein araam karne ki sakht zaroorat thi sabko.

Ghar aane par Samir phir apni maa ki goad mein roya aur bayaan kiya ke kiss tarah khatarnaak toofaan mein ghira hua tha aur lagta tha nahin bach paega. Usske bhai behen bhi uss se gale milkar ro pade jiss tarah se uss ne sabko bataya ke woh shayad zinda wapas nahin ata aaj!

Uss haadse ne Samir ko jhinjorr diya tha. Ussko samajh mein nahin araha tha ke woh ab kia chahta hai zindagi se. Jab ussne Afzal ki baatein yaad kiye jiss tarah ussne apni menbooba ko paighaam ponhuchane ko kaha tha to firse se Samir ko ek pyari si mehbooba ki chahh jaagi usske mann mein. Aur uss ne apni maa se kaha ke ab woh shaadi ke liye tayyaar hai. Maa baap ko bahot khushi hui aur baap ne kaha ke jald hi ussko ek ladki dikhane chalenge.

Udhar Afzal ke yahan chat mangni pat shaadi wali baat ho gayi. Usski shaadi fix ho gayi agle mahine ke liye. Unit se ussne chhuthi le liya shaadi karne ke liye. Aur Samir ne bhi chuthi liya Afzal ke yahan shaadi mein haazir hone ke liye.

Samir ko aur do jagah ladki dekhne ke liye le jaya gaya magar ek jagah Samir ko ladki passand nahin aayi aur dusri jagah ladki ne Samir ko ek taraf bula kar saaf bata diya ke woh kissi ko chahti hai to samir se inkaar karne ko kaha, to wahan bhi baat nahin bani. Tab Samir ne socha ke achchi ladkiyan bhi hote hein, yeh ladki agar chahti to kuch nahin batati, magar saaf dil ki thi ke samir ko pehle hi bata diya. Usska nazarya ladkiyon ke taraf kuch kuch badalne laga.

Afzal ki shaadi ka din aya aur Samir ne jamke shaadi mein saath diya aur khub enjoy bhi kiya. Wahan samir ke maa baap bhi gaye hue the aur wohi mauka tha Samir ke liye ladki passand karne ki. Maa, baap apna kaam kar rahe the uss shaadi mein. Badon ke beech baat chal rahi thi ke Samir ki yog koyi ladki chahiye….. Aur bahot jald wahan ke sabhi bade logon ko khabar mil gayi ke ek nawjawan ladke ke liye ek ladki ki zaroorat hai. To wahin par Samir ko man passand ladki mili jab donon taraf ke parents ne baat kar liye. Ladki ko dekhne ke baad jo Afzal ke baap ki dost ki beti thi, Samir ne approve kiya.

Approve karne se pehle Samir ne uss ladki ke bare mein Afzal se pooch taaj kiya magar Afzal ne kaha ke woh ussko bilkool nahin jaanta, kabhi mila bhi nahin maagar usske pita ko jaanta hai kyun ke woh usske yahan aksar aya karte the Afzal ke papa se milne kyun ke woh dost the ek hi jagah kaam karte the. Ladki khub surat thi, aur Samir ko bha gayi.

To be continued……..

Nice Updates

(20-03-2018, 02:47 PM)dpmangla : Nice Updates

Thank you very much my best reader

Update 8

Samir & ?? (his girlfriend’s name?)


Ajeeb bat thi ke jo ladki Samir ke liye dekhi gayi uss ka naam tha Samira. Iss baat se donon Samir aur Samira ko heyrani hui aur Samir ne socha ke shayad yeh kismat ka khel hai aur unn donon ko kismat ne hi milaya. Kehte hein nah ke rishte upar se bankar ate hein to Samir ne eisa hi socha ke har rishta upar wala pehle se hi bana diye hote hein aur yahan dharti par humko milna baaki hota hai.

Afzal ke shadi ke thik ek hafte baad Samir aur Samira ki mangni hui. Samira ek khub surat ladki thi aur filmi heroinon jeisi dikhti thi. College mein padhati thi yaane teacher thi. Modern thi aur bilkool Shanaya ke ulti mizaaj ki thi. Yeh wali bolti thi khulkar sabhi se. Ab teacher thi to open minded thi. Isske bare mein Samir aur Afzal ne bat kiye to donon doston ne apne apne man passand ladki ke bare mein yehi kaha ke kaun kissko kabhi pehchaan sakta hai, woh to dhire dhire ek dusre ke saath jiwan bitane ke baad thik se ek dusre ki pehchaan hoti hai aur zindagi aguey badhti hai.

Afzal apne shaadi se bahot khush tha aur Samir se kaha ke usski biwi bahot achchi hai aur ussko bahot pyar ho gaya uss se. Magar Samir to Samira se ab milne aur jaan pehchaan karne wala tha mangni ke baad. Eise rishton mein shaadi ke baad pyar hota hai shaadi se pehle nahin. Shaadi ke mahinon baad ek dusre ki asli pehchaan hoti hai aur ek dusre ke kareeb hote hein do dil.

Phir bhi Samir mangni ke baad Samira se milna chaha aur donon mile bhi. Samir ka rawaya jo pehle ladkiyon ke taraf tha woh badalne laga tha par woh ziada khulkar ladkiyon se baat nahin kar paata tha. Keise bhi usske dil mein kuch kuch darr aur ajeeb si soch thi jab ladkiyon ko sochta tha aaj kal ke haadson ko lekar. Iss modern zamane mein jo aaj kal ho rahe hein aur jiss tarike se ladkiyon ko chhuth mili hai uss se bahot sare ladkiyan usska ghalat istemaal karte hein aur khud phanss jate hein baad mein aur pachtaate hein.

Samir jab apne muhalle ke doston ke beech mein tha ek din Samira se milne ke baad to phir se wohi ladkiyon ke bare mein baat karne lage to iss baar unn logon ke beech ek 55 saal ka adher aadmi bhi tha jo sharaabi tha aur dukaan ke kissi koney mein pada rehta tha aksar. Woh inn nawjawanon ki batein sun raha tha to kuch bolne ki ijazat mangi ussne.Samir ne usssko bolne ko kaha. Woh tajurbekaar aadmi ne yeh kaha;

“Yaro, baat yeh hai ke iss zamane mein pariwaar apne aulaad ko samaye nahin de pate hein. Donon maa baap kaam karne nikal jate hein aur bache ko ziada chhuth milti hai kuch bhi karnne ko. Ek zamana eisa tha ke hum mard kaam karne jate the aur bachon ko ghar mein biwi sambhaalti thi, usske nigraani mein rehte the bachche, aur phir ghar mein dada aur dadi bhi hua karte the. To bache ke parvarish ek eisa vatavaran mein hoti thi jahan ussko bahot sara pyar aur apnapan milte the. Aur bache badon ka lihaaz karte the, sabki izat kartte the kyun ko ussko yehi sikhaya jata tha. To bache apne dada, dadi aur maa ke saath pale bade hote the to usska assar kuch aur hi hota tha. Magar aaj kal donon jawan maa baap ek flat mein rehte hein na dada hai na dadi, bache ko nursery mein chorr jaate hein aur iss bhaag daur ki zindagi mein paisa kamana ziada important ho gaya hai sab ke liye. Uss zamane mein sirf mard kamata tha aur biwi aur bachchon ko paalta posta tha aur padhata bhi tha; aaj donon pati patni kama rahe hein phir bhi paisa kum pad rahe hein.

To baat yeh kehna chahta hoon jo pyar aur apnapan bachon ko maa baap se milna chahjiye tha woh nahin milte bachon ko. Isska bura assar padta hai bachon par aur phir teenage mein kadam rakhte hi bache wohi karte hein jo ussko achcha lagta hai, koyi drugs ke taraf badh jata hai aur koyi prostitution ki taraf. Har ladke ladkiyon ko bahot ziada chhuth mil gayi hai aaj kal ek dusre se milne ko kyun ke maa baap ke paas samaye hi nahin yeh dekhne ko bacha kiss se milta hai, kahan jata hai, kia karta hai…. Kuch pata rakhne ka time hi nahin hai parents ke paas, subha ko kaam ke liye nikalte hein parents aur der raat ko wapas ate hein, bache ke saath thik se time bhi nahin bitate to eise bache kia banenge bhai? Isssi liye aaj kal ke ziada tar teenagers ghalat raaste par hein aur itna kuch ghalat ho rahe hein samaaj mein!! ….. Ab abhi tum log jo jinn ladkiyon ke bare mein baat kar rahe the unn ka environemeent kia hai? Sab jaante ho nah? Uss Kavita ke bare mein baat kar rahe the tum log abhi nah? Pregnant ho gayi choti si umar mein, college girl hai aur pregnant. Iss mein dosh kisska hai? Jiss mahaul mein woh pali badhi hai pata hai tum logon ko? Kaun usski dekh bhaal karta hai? Maa baap unnke saath waqt bitate hein? Akeli rehti hai din bhar, college se wapas ati hai to kitne sare ladke uss se milne jaate hai uss ke ghar, maa baap to hai nahin donon kaam par gaye hote hein aur raat der ko wapas ate hein. Koyi nahin hai usski dekh bhaal karne wala to ladki kia karegi? Kaun ussko samjhega? Eise bahot sare cases hote hein jo pyar aur apnaapan nahin pane ki vajah se bhatak jaate hein. Kayi ladke eise hein jo drugs ki aadi ho jaate hein. Yeh teenage umar hi eisi hoti hai jab har tarah ke cheezon ko aazmaane ka mann karta hai. Yeh eisi umar hai jahan ek direction ko follow karne ka mann hota hai, ek badlaav zindagi mein lane ka mann hota hai… aur ache guide nahin hone ke kaaran bache wohi karte hein jo usske mann mein ata hai. To aaj kal ki ladkiyan iss liye eise ghalat tarah se behave karte hein aur issi liye aaj eise ladkiyon aur ladko ka sankhiya badha hua hai. Main dosh sirf maa baap ko hi dunga! Jiss maa baap ne apne bachon ko sambhala aur pyar diya unn ke bache to sahi hai jeise tum log ho! ….. mujhe yehi kehna tha!!”

Aur woh aadmi ek taraf chala gaya. Samir ne dosto se kaha,

“Yeh to bhaashan de gaya yaar!”

Ek dost: “Magar bilkool sahi kaha jo bhi kaha uss ne!”

Samir: “Sach hai, hum log to apne maa baap ke karib hein. Unn ka control raha hum par chohte se hi, magar uss kavita ko to bahot ziada chhuth mili hai bachpan se!!shaayad issi liye woh eisi nikli nah!”

Baad mein Samir sochne laga ke usska soch ghalat tha ladkiyon ke bare mein… shaayad woh ghalat hi soch raha tha aur unn ladkiyon ko kos raha tha aksar…magar dosh unn ke nahin the, eisa Samir ne socha iss baar!!

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Ab Samir, Samira se milne gaya kayi baar, kabhi college khatam hone ke baad, to kabhi Saturdays ko donon mile, café gaye, pizza khane gaye aur thoda ghumne bhi gaye. Samir ko usske ziada karib jane mein hichkichahat ho rahi thi.yeh pehli baar zindagi mein woh kissi ladki ke saath tha, pehla kiss bhi nahin kiya tha. To teesri ya chawthi baar milne par Samira ko ek makaan ke piche legaya, donon khade the aur Samira Uss makaan ke deewar par apne peeth kiye khadi thi ke Samir ne ussko deewar se chipkaya aur dhire se apne donon haton ko Samira ke hathon mein dala aur donon ke panje ke ungliyan ek dusre ke pancho ungliyon ko jakre hue the, jab Samir ne apne honthon ko Samira ke honthon par dhire se nazdik kiya aur halke se chuma!! Samira ne enkhen bandh kar liye the magar Samir usske chehre ko nihaar raha tha…aur usski honth ko chumne ke baad Samir ne dhire se kaha, “I love you”….. Samira sharmaayi, sar jhukaya aur dhire se jawaab diya gaalon paar laali late hue, “I love you too” Phir to samir ki lag gayi yaaro….. Ussne, Samira ko uss deewaar se daba diya aur apne jism ka wazan Samira ke pure jism par agaya aur Samira Quaid ho gayi Samir ki bahon mein aur donon ke munh ek dusre ke munh ko chumne lage……

To be continued………………….

Update 9

The especial meeting


Chalo aaj ek erotic update kar deta hoon doston ke liye

Raat ko Samir so nahin paa raha tha. Sirf Samira ki yaad arahi thi usse. Uss drisht ki ko sirf soch nahin, feel kar raha tha. Kiss tarah se Samira ki jism usske jism se satte hue the, keise usski boobs khud ke chaati par dabbe hue the aur usske jeeb Samira ki jeeb ko chuss raha tha….. Samir ka khada ho gaya tha bilkol raat ko bistar par, karib sare gyarah baje the. Aur ussi drisht ko feel kiye jaa raha tha. Samira ek tight churidaar mein thi, aur usski dupata kaandhe se sarak gayi thi, aur kiss karte waqt Samir ki enkhen Samira ke kandhe par gayi aur usski bra ki straps kandhe par nazar aayi thi…uss mulayam gori chamre par uss bra ki strap ka hona eroticism ko aur mazbut kar raha tha aur Samir uss waqt bhi bahot utejit ho gaya tha, khada ho gaya tha aur Samira ki jaangh par apne kamar ko dabaate hue apne khade lund ko dabaya tha aur uss waqt Samira kasmasaayi thi……

Yeh sab yaad karte hue Samir se raha nahin gaya aur uss waqt Samira ko phone kiya. Samira ne uss late night ke bawajud phone uthaayi. Aur Samir ne kaha,

“Tumhari bahot yaad arahi hai, tum bhi nahin soyi kia jo turant phone utha liye?”

Samira: “bus neend ane hi wali thi ke phone baj gayi, tum kyun nahin soe abhi tak?”

Samir: “kaha nah tumhari yaad sata rahi hai ab! – sunon ek kaam karo kal milte hein!”?

Samira: “kal? Kab? Kal kaam par jana hai!”

Samir: “mat jao ek leave lelo main bhi kal sick report karta hoon!”

Samir: “kyun? Eisi bechaini kyun?”

Samir: Pata nahin, bus bolo leave le sakti ho ya nahin!”

Samira: “Hello! Order de rahe ho ya request kar rahe ho? Comando ho to mujhpar eise order nahin chalega Sir ji!! Hihihi”

Samir “Mazaak chorro aur batao aa rahi ho milne ya nahin?”

Samira: “Okay okay thik hai, kal leave le leti hoon ab khush? Chalo ab good night sweet dreams and muuuuuuuuaaaaaaaah”

Samir jawaab de hi raha tha ke hansste hue Samira ne phone kaat diya.

Subha ko phir phone pe baat hui aur milne ki jagah par donon mile 10 baje! Wahan baat hui ke kahan jaenge. Samira ne poocha, “kahan chalen?”

Samir ne kaha, “Dekho open mein charon taraf log hein, bhid bhad se kahin door chalte hein.”

Samira: “han, magar kahan?”

Samir: “ek hotel room mein chalen?”

Muskurate hue Samira ne ek taraf dekhte hue kaha, “Niyat to thik hai janaab ki?”

Samir bola: “Dekho 24 saal ka ho gaya hoon aaj tak kissi ladki ke saath waqt nahbin bitaya, koyi nahin tha mera, aur ab mili ho to armanon ko pura karlun!”
Samira tayaar thi jaane ke liye aur donon ek hotel ke room mein ponhuche.

Samira ek kurti mein thi, usski ki umr 23 thi, yane ek saal Samir se chohti thi. Modern thi, phir bhi ladki thi aur ladkiyon jeise nazaakat, adaein, full feminity to thi uss mein.

Bistar par apne handbag ko rakh kar Samira room ke charon taraf dekhne lagi aur usske gaal laal ho gaye kyunke ussko pata tha ke ek kamre mein aae hein to kia hone wala hoga. Udhar Samir ka dil zoron se dhadak raha tha aur usske samajh mein nahin aa raha tha keise start Karen!

Aur Samir kaafi jazbaati hokar Samira ko peeche se usske bahon ke neeche se apne bazuon ko karte hue ussko jakra aur Samira ke piche wale hisse ke kaandhon par apne chehre ko rakha aur kaha, “Dekho main ne aaj tak kissi ko pyar nahin kiya aur aaj pehhli baar ek ladki ke saath ek kamre mein akele aya hoon aur mujhse intezaar nahin ho raha, main bahot bekabu hoon aur pata nahin kia kar baithun….tum bahot mast ho aur main bekaraar, mujhko rokna mat please…..”

Samira ne usske hathon ko apne front part par apne haton mein jakre hue sar ko mudhkar usske chehre ko dekhte hue muskuraayi aur whisper mein kaha, “Main ne roka hai kia tumko hmm?”

Uss waqt donon khade hue the aur Samir ka lund Samira ki chutaron par daba hua tha jissko Samira ne feel kiya aur usska chehra laal ho gaya tha…. Aur ahiste ahiste Samir ka jeeb Samira ke kandhon se hote hue usski gaalon tak ponhuche, phir ahiste ahiste usske honthon tak….. tab bhi Samir Samira ke piche khada tha ussko jakre hue. Aur dhire se Samir ne apne ek hath ko Samira ke kaandhe se laate hue usski boob par kiya phir turant Samira ne apne hath ko usske hath par zor se dabaya apne jism ko usske jism se ziada zor se dabae hue…..

Phir hona kia tha; donon direct bed par ho gaye….. Iss baar Samira peth par thi aur samir usske upar, donon ek lambe kiss mein khoe hue the. Aur kiss karte waqt Samir ka hath Samira ki jism ke har kone ko tarash raha tha, hath fer raha tha charon taraf, kurti ke niche hath ghused diya, boob ke taraf hath badha raha tha par Samira ussko har waqt rok leti thi usske haath ko apne hath mein pakar kar…. Jab Samir ne apna haath usski kamar par phera aur usski salwaar ke andar haath dalna chaha tab bhi Samira ne samir ka haath thaam liya aur kiss ko rokte hue apne sar ko piche ke taraf kiya kasmasaate hue…. Samir ne usske kaanon mein kaha, “mujhe isski zaroorat hai baby, mat roko mujhe, 24 saal ka ho gaya hoon aaj tak nahin kiya karne do na, aaguey badhne do mujhe…..” Aur Samira ne dabbe awaaz mein kaha, “3 mahinon mein hamari shaadi hai 3 mahine intezaar nahin kar sakte tum kia, sabar to karo!”

Nice Updates

(22-03-2018, 02:52 PM)dpmangla : Nice Updates

Thank you brother dpmangla

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