UPDATE - 1

Ik river(darya) main larka (behosh) behta hua jaa reha hey. kabhi kis pathar(chatan) sey takrata hey to kabhi kis sey. jism par zakham hain. aur khoon beh reha hey.

......24 saal pehly flashback......

ik aurat hanfty huay apny 2 jurwa bacho ko utha kar bhag rahi thi.
us kay pichy kuch log bhag rehy thay.

wo pull(Bridge) kay oper sey guzar rahi thi (Bridge jis kay nichy sey highway guzarti hey)

achanak us pa paoun ik pathar sey takraya jis sey ik bacha hath sey nikal gia aur ____ pull sey nechy ja gira.

aurat zimin par giri jaldi sey khud ko sambhala aur aur apny ik bachy ko utha lia aur pul sey nechy daikhny lagi. Lakin bacha kahi nhi dikha.

bacha nazar na aya.yeah daikh kar wo rony lagi.

achanak ksi ki awaz Aai.

Gunda- pakar lo uss randi ko mujhy wo bachy zinda chahiay.

yeah sun kar aurat dar gai aur phir sey bhagny lagi.

tabhi ik car agy sey Aati hui nazar Aai. car main kreeb 50 saal ka ik admi tha. us admi ney yeah manzar daikha to foran apni car ko whi sey mor lia. aur aurat ko Awaz di.

UPDATE - 2


tabhi ik car agy sey Aati hui nazar Aai. car main kreeb 50 saal ka ik admi tha. us admi ney yeah manzar daikha to foran apni car ko whi sey mor lia. aur aurat ko Awaz lagai.

......... next............

Admi- beti jaldi sey car main Aa jaow.

aurat car kar paas Aai too pechy sey firing shru ho gai. golio ki bochar any lagi.

ik goli us aurat ko lagi car main baithty huay. us kay muah sey ik chekh nikli. aurat car main baith gai.

wo gundy kreeb phunch gay.

is sey pehly kay wo car tak phunchty Admi ney car teez bhaga di.

Gundy- nikal gai sali, ja kar dhundo usy warna hum sab mary jayin gay.

dusri traf...

Admi- tum kon ho beti aur yeah kon log thay......

koi jwab nhi bas taiz sanso ki aur krahny kay sath rony ki awaz

Abmi- beti kia tum theek to ho.

Aurat- main theek hu. par meri beti ( krahty huay ik dard bhari awaz main)

Admi- Oo no tumhy to goli lagi hey. main abhi hospital ley Kay jata hu.

Aurat- app ka bohat bohat dhanywaad kay app ney Ahhhhh
humari madad ki. Aaa yeah dard. mera bachna mushkil hey par plz app mery bachy ko bacha li jiay.
isy bohat chot lagi hey. main pehly hi apni bachi ko kho c.chuki hu. Ahhh...hh .... ( bhari awaz main sans ubhri hui)

Admi- app fikar na karo kuch nhi ho ga.

Admi bolta reha par koi jwab nhi aya. jab pechy daikha too aurat ki ankhy band thi.

admi ney car rok kar aurat ko check kia too Admi ki ankh num ho gai... aurat bohat zakhmi thi.

yeah sab daikh kar us ko dukh hua. phir bachy ko check kia.

bacha koi harkat nhi kar reha rha

admi ney bachy ko seny par kaan lagaya too wo zinda tha.

Admi- kitna khubsurat bacha hey meny ajj tak nhi daikha. beta mujhy maaf kerna main tumhari maa ko bacha nhi saka. main too yeah bhi nhi puch saka kay tum kon ho tumhara naam kia hey .( yeah kehty huay ankho main ansoo Aa gyy)

admi car chalany laga aur sochny laga bachy kay bary main
kay is ka kia kia jay. phir usy yaad aya kay main isy apny bhatijy ko dey deta hu. wo aur us ki biwi isy paly gi. abb mery uper bohat bari zimadari Aa gai hey. main kosish karu ga kay is ka parivar mil jay ya koi rishtadar

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Achchhi shuraat .

Bhailog ye kahani mera nahi hai mera ek alex naam ka friend hai uska hai jo bi is kahani ke bareme prashamsa dena ho wo alex ko dedicate kare

(19-12-2017, 12:22 PM)urc4me : Achchhi shuraat .

Thank you bhai

Dusri Traf....

ik admi apni pregnent biwi ko hospital ley kar jaa reha tha (jeep main). biwi agy wali seat par baithi krah rahi thi admi apni biwi ko samjha reha tha.

Admi- hosla rakho meri jaan hum abhi thori dair main phunch jayin gay.

achanak pul kay nichy sey guzarty huay admi ko jeep ko jhatka laga. us ko ehsas hua kay koi chez nechy giri hey jeep main us ney pechy daikha to back seat par kuch tha kapry main lapita. par admi.ko jaldi thi too us ney dhyan nhi dia aur hospital chal dia.
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hospital main us ki biwi ko ik beti hui par wo mari(dead) hui paida hui.

doctor ney jab yeah us admi ko bataya too wo rony laga.

admi ko dar tha kay ager us ki biwi ko pata chala kay us ki bachi mar gai hey too usy dukh ho ga. khi wo apni biwi ko kho na dey.

phir khud ko control kar kay bahir aya medical store sey medicines leny jesy hi jeep main baitha too ksi bachy kay rony ki awaz Aai.

jab jeep ki pichli seat par daikha too usi kapry main koi bacha tha.

us ney jaldi sey kapra hataya too andar ik choti si bachi thi. jisy daikh kar uss ki ankho main anso Aa gay. yeah too ..................... ,... .

us ney usy siny sey laga lia...(bachi kay galy main loclet tha )

wo kush ho gia uss ney usy apnany ka faisla kia aur usy apni biwi ki goud main dall dia.
(us ki biwi bohat kush thi uss ney apni biwi ko pata hi nhi chalny dia kay yeah uss ki beti nhi hey)
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......18 years later......

** CHARACTERS **

ALI. (hero)
Afzal. ( sahil kay Dad 50years)
Seher. ( sahil ki Mom 45 years)
Sahil. ( Afzal aur seher ka beta )

Thakur Pratap Sing. ( dr.Anu K husband)
DR. Anu. ( thakur ki wifi & Rukmari ki behan )
madam Rukmari. ( ali ki teacher )

Characters aur bhi hain joo Aaty rehy gyy..










UPDATE-4



......18 Year later......



Bathroom ka door khula aur Seher ik transprant Nighty pehny room main enter hui.

Afzal- jan-e-man ajj to bari bijlia gira rahi ho. Aow meri baho main ajj phir pyar karny ka man ho reha hey.

Seher- har bar mujhy pyasa chor dety ho aur khud soo jaty ho.

Afzal- ajj aisa nhi ho ga. ajj meny goli khai hey.

yeah sun kar seher kay honto par muskan phail jati hey.

wo apni nighty utar deti hey. aur Afzal apny oper sey chadar utar deta hey.

phir dono ik dusry kay jism ko rub kerny lagty hain.
seher afzal ka lund ko hilany lagti aur apny muah main ley kar chusny lagti hey. 4 mint chusny kay baad Lun khara ho jata hey(Semi errect)

afzal jaldi sey seher ki tango main Aa jata hey aur apna lund ander kar deta hey.

8 mint ki chudai kay baad afzal apna virya choor deta hey.

thori dair baad.

Seher- ajj app sey ik baat karni thi.

Afzal- han bolo.

Seher- main yeah chahti hu kay "Ali" ka kuch karo.

Afzal- abb kia kar dia us ney.

Seher- (abb kia batow tujy wo kamina jab daikho ghar rehta hey main din main ksi ko ghar bula kar chudai bhi nhi kar sakti)

Afzal- kia hua, chup Q ho?

Seher- Bas main aur bardasht nhi kar sakti usy.

Afzal- meri jaan sabar karo hum jald hi Crore pati ho jay gay.

Seher- wo sab baad ki baat hey pehly us Ali ka kuch karo kal bhi us ney mery bety Sahil sey larai ki. usy yeah bhi tameez nhi kay sahil us sey 1 saal bara hey. mujhy gussa Aa gia aur main ney...

Afzal- mujhy puri baat batow kay kia hua.

Seher- hua yeah kay kal jab main market gai thi too mera beta sahil ik larki ka hath pakry usy uss sey kuch keh reha tha par larki apna hath chura rahi thi.
sahil ney us larki ko thappar mara too wo kameena ali khi sey Aa gia aur mery bety sahil ko thappar mar dia. wo nechy gir gia yeah daikh kar mujhy bhi gussa Aa gia akhir maa hu. meny sarak sey danda uthaya aur bich sarak main Ali ko achy sey mara.

Afzal- yeah kia kar dia tu ney. usy bich sarak main too na marti. kal log kia kehy gay.

Seher- mujhy parwa nhi. kal sey main usy apny ghar main na daikhu.

Afzal- par uss ka main kia karu. tu janti hey kay Ali kay naam Locker hey mery taya ney 2Crore rakhwa diay hain. ager usy nikal dia too samajh lena kay wo hath sey gia.

Seher- khud too mar gia humary galy musibat dal gia.... han ik rasta hey.

Afzal- kia?

Seher- app usy dusry ksi sehar bhaij dain agy ki parhai wo whi kary. whi ksi hostel main reh ley ga.

Afzal- theek hey main kuch karta hu. abb so jow.

next day...

Ali kay uper pani gira.

Ali hadbada kar uth gia. samny seher khari thi aur ali ko galia dey rahi thi.

Ali- sorry mom wo raat ko neend nhi Aai iss liay late utha.

Seher- chal uth abb ajj tera result hey na.

Result ka naam sunty hi ali jaldi sey utha. aur fresh hony chala gia.

phir ali nashty kay liay table par baitha. sab nashta kerny lagy.
Sahil gussy main Ali ko daikh reha tha. par ali ney uss par koi dhyan nhi dia aur khana khany laga.

Sahil- ( sala kamina, kitna khana khata hey. Ksi din badla zaroor lu ga tujh sey)
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ajj result aya ali ney 11th class main top kia.

phir Ali ghar wapis aya sham ko

Afzal- Ali beta main chahta hu kay tum abb agy ki parhai dusry seher main karo.

(yeah sun kar Ali ka chehra utar gia. par wo janta tha kay sahil ko thappar marny ki waja sey aisa ho reha hey. par woo kia karta majboor tha. sahil bhai larki sey zabardasti kar reha tha.)

Afzal- meny whan baat kar li hey Collage teacher mera dost hey wo tumhara admission kar dey ga. tum whan hostel main reho gay.

( yeah sun kar sahil khush hua, wo hamisha ali sey jalta tha. Sahil ka kaam tha sara din awara gardi kerna )

Ali- theek hey dad. jesi app ki marzi.

phir waqt guzarta reha.

kal ali ko hostel jana tha. dusry seher.

Ali apny room main baitha yhi soch reha tha kay akhir kia waja hey kay uss kay ghar aisa kar rehy hain us kay sath. akhir mujhy sey itni nafrat Q karty hain.

(20-12-2017, 12:46 PM)Raguhalkal : ** CHARACTERS **

ALI. (hero)
Afzal. ( sahil kay Dad 50years)
Seher. ( sahil ki Mom 45 years)
Sahil. ( Afzal aur seher ka beta )

Thakur Pratap Sing. ( dr.Anu K husband)
DR. Anu. ( thakur ki wifi & Rukmari ki behan )
madam Rukmari. ( ali ki teacher )

Characters aur bhi hain joo Aaty rehy gyy..










UPDATE-4



......18 Year later......



Bathroom ka door khula aur Seher ik transprant Nighty pehny room main enter hui.

Afzal- jan-e-man ajj to bari bijlia gira rahi ho. Aow meri baho main ajj phir pyar karny ka man ho reha hey.

Seher- har bar mujhy pyasa chor dety ho aur khud soo jaty ho.

Afzal- ajj aisa nhi ho ga. ajj meny goli khai hey.

yeah sun kar seher kay honto par muskan phail jati hey.

wo apni nighty utar deti hey. aur Afzal apny oper sey chadar utar deta hey.

phir dono ik dusry kay jism ko rub kerny lagty hain.
seher afzal ka lund ko hilany lagti aur apny muah main ley kar chusny lagti hey. 4 mint chusny kay baad Lun khara ho jata hey(Semi errect)

afzal jaldi sey seher ki tango main Aa jata hey aur apna lund ander kar deta hey.

8 mint ki chudai kay baad afzal apna virya choor deta hey.

thori dair baad.

Seher- ajj app sey ik baat karni thi.

Afzal- han bolo.

Seher- main yeah chahti hu kay "Ali" ka kuch karo.

Afzal- abb kia kar dia us ney.

Seher- (abb kia batow tujy wo kamina jab daikho ghar rehta hey main din main ksi ko ghar bula kar chudai bhi nhi kar sakti)

Afzal- kia hua, chup Q ho?

Seher- Bas main aur bardasht nhi kar sakti usy.

Afzal- meri jaan sabar karo hum jald hi Crore pati ho jay gay.

Seher- wo sab baad ki baat hey pehly us Ali ka kuch karo kal bhi us ney mery bety Sahil sey larai ki. usy yeah bhi tameez nhi kay sahil us sey 1 saal bara hey. mujhy gussa Aa gia aur main ney...

Afzal- mujhy puri baat batow kay kia hua.

Seher- hua yeah kay kal jab main market gai thi too mera beta sahil ik larki ka hath pakry usy uss sey kuch keh reha tha par larki apna hath chura rahi thi.
sahil ney us larki ko thappar mara too wo kameena ali khi sey Aa gia aur mery bety sahil ko thappar mar dia. wo nechy gir gia yeah daikh kar mujhy bhi gussa Aa gia akhir maa hu. meny sarak sey danda uthaya aur bich sarak main Ali ko achy sey mara.

Afzal- yeah kia kar dia tu ney. usy bich sarak main too na marti. kal log kia kehy gay.

Seher- mujhy parwa nhi. kal sey main usy apny ghar main na daikhu.

Afzal- par uss ka main kia karu. tu janti hey kay Ali kay naam Locker hey mery taya ney 2Crore rakhwa diay hain. ager usy nikal dia too samajh lena kay wo hath sey gia.

Seher- khud too mar gia humary galy musibat dal gia.... han ik rasta hey.

Afzal- kia?

Seher- app usy dusry ksi sehar bhaij dain agy ki parhai wo whi kary. whi ksi hostel main reh ley ga.

Afzal- theek hey main kuch karta hu. abb so jow.

next day...

Ali kay uper pani gira.

Ali hadbada kar uth gia. samny seher khari thi aur ali ko galia dey rahi thi.

Ali- sorry mom wo raat ko neend nhi Aai iss liay late utha.

Seher- chal uth abb ajj tera result hey na.

Result ka naam sunty hi ali jaldi sey utha. aur fresh hony chala gia.

phir ali nashty kay liay table par baitha. sab nashta kerny lagy.
Sahil gussy main Ali ko daikh reha tha. par ali ney uss par koi dhyan nhi dia aur khana khany laga.

Sahil- ( sala kamina, kitna khana khata hey. Ksi din badla zaroor lu ga tujh sey)
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ajj result aya ali ney 11th class main top kia.

phir Ali ghar wapis aya sham ko

Afzal- Ali beta main chahta hu kay tum abb agy ki parhai dusry seher main karo.

(yeah sun kar Ali ka chehra utar gia. par wo janta tha kay sahil ko thappar marny ki waja sey aisa ho reha hey. par woo kia karta majboor tha. sahil bhai larki sey zabardasti kar reha tha.)

Afzal- meny whan baat kar li hey Collage teacher mera dost hey wo tumhara admission kar dey ga. tum whan hostel main reho gay.

( yeah sun kar sahil khush hua, wo hamisha ali sey jalta tha. Sahil ka kaam tha sara din awara gardi kerna )

Ali- theek hey dad. jesi app ki marzi.

phir waqt guzarta reha.

kal ali ko hostel jana tha. dusry seher.

Ali apny room main baitha yhi soch reha tha kay akhir kia waja hey kay uss kay ghar aisa kar rehy hain us kay sath. akhir mujhy sey itni nafrat Q karty hain.

Kahani jamne me abhi samay lagega. Kahani ke bade update diya kare jisse intejari na karni pade.

UPDATE - 5



Ali apny room main baitha yhi soch reha tha kay akhir kia waja hey kay uss kay ghar waly aisa kar rehy hain us kay sath. akhir mujhy sey itni nafrat Q karty hain.


next day...

Ali ney apna saman pack kia aur sab sey mila sahil nhi milna chahta tha par ali uss sey mafi mangny laga aur usy zabardasti galy laga lia. aur rony laga.

Sahil- chal abb yeah drama band kar aur jaldi jaa warna train late ho jay gi.

phir ali apni maa sey mila aur chala gia dad kay sath.

train main safar 6 ghanty ka tha

wo sham ko whan phunchy aur ali dad kay sath hostel gia.

yhan hostal ka incharge sey mily jo kafi stricked tha.

afzal ali ko chor kar wapis chalya gaya

Hostel incharge- suno larky yhan kuch rules hain tumhy wo folow kerny hon gay.

Ali- yes sir.

Hostel incharge- yhan khana time par mily ga late nhi hona warna bhoky so jana, Subha 5 bajy uthna hey exercise kay baad nashta aur phir collage, larai jhagra bilkul nhi kerna warna ....,....,....,.etc.

( ali itny sary rules sun kar apna sir khujany laga)

phir mujhy mery room main bhaij dia gia.

room main hum 3 larky thay.

Ajay, Vijay room mate.

Ajay- mera naam ajay hey aur yeah vijay hey.

Ali- mera naam Ali hey.

Vijay- han to ali kesa laga incharge ka bhashan.

Vijay- sala bohat kasrat karwata hey. mera too abhi bhi hadio main dard ho reha hey.. hey bhi sala Army sey.

Vijay- chal chor na yar. tu janta hey sab larky kesy dhoka dety hain us major ko. Hahahahah.

yeah keh kar dono hansny lagy.

Ali dono ki baty sunta reha. itna too pata chal gia tha ali ko kay yeah incharge bohat krak hey.

phir raat ko khany ka time hua. Ali ney 6 rotia ley lii. ajay aur vijay daikhty hi reh gay.

Ajay- abay kia kar reha hey. itni khana khaa ley ga kia. hum sey too 2 bhi nhi khai jati.

Vijay- ager na kha saka too woo khroos incharge yhi kal ka nashta dey ga tujhy.

Ali bas muskra dia. aur sab khana kha kar sony sey pehly ali ground main. track par 30 mint bhagta reha. phir soo gia.

next day...

ajj ali subha utha ground main incharge ney exercise karwai
sab ko sans charha hua tha (bhag bhag kar aur kasrat kar kay) incharge ney notice kia kay Ali ko itni kasrat sey koi farak hi nhi para.. wo bilkul fresh nazar Aa reha hey.

incharge- ruko larky.

main ruk gia

incharge- kia tum pehly kasrat kerty rehty ho kia.

Ali- yes sir. kabhi kabhi jab time mily tab.

incharge- tabhi kafi achi practice hey tumhari Good, keep it up. abb jaow.

Ali- thank u sir.

phir nashty kay baad tyar ho kar ajay aur vijay kay sath colg kay liay nikal gia.

jab main colg phuncha too sab larkia mujhy daikh rahi thi. meny apny kano par gour kia too yeah awazy Aai.

kitna handsome hey. kitna cute, sundar larka hey. new aya hey. wow. etc

mujhy yeah sun kay thora acha laga. Q kay ajj tak bohay kam logo ney aisa kaha tha.

Bad not good story very short logo ko long stories padhne mein maja aata hain ye daily short stories padhne mein koi maja nahi agar updates dene ho to please thode bade do nahi to sabko story boring lagegi please bura mat manna meri baat ka but choti stories bhaut boring lagti hain dobara uss story ko khol kar padhne ka mann nahi karta