05-01-2018, 08:00 PM (This post was last modified: 05-01-2018, 08:01 PM by honey boy.)
Update 2
Gate ke sise se sans lete huye Sahil ko dekhta bas dil se yahi dua kar raha tha.....
"Come-on champ, ab jaag bhi jao, bahut sare sawal hain jiska jabaw sirf tum ho, bahut dauraya hai mujhe .... Come on resilient .... Wake up..... abhi hume bahut se kaam karne hain sath milkar"
Sabki aankhen bas Sahil ke hosh me aane par tiki thi. Sayad utsukta ye bhi ehsaas nahi karwati, ki jis tatkalik isthiti me Sahil jindgi aur maut ke bich joojh raha tha, itna waqt abhi nahi gujra ki wo hosh me aa jaye.
Kai tarah ke log, par sab ko bas ek he baat ka intzar... Sahil kab hosh me aa raha hai.
Din se saam ho gayi thi, har ghante ki report Dr Madan tak pahunch rahi thi. Gambhir haalat me tha Sahil aur matr rati bhar sudhar ho raha tha.....
Bakshi, Dr Madan ke cabin me ghumte-ghumte pahuncha....
Dr Madan..... Kahiye sir, kya sewa karun...
Bakshi..... Bas uss patient ko ek baar hosh me le aaeye, main apna kaam khatam karoon.
Madan.... Sir, ek baat puchhun
Bakshi.... Gajab ho gaya, puchhna mera kaam hai, aur aap mujh se he kuch puchhna chahte hai, puchhiye-puchhiye, par yaad rahe baat buri lagi to .... You will no more.
Dr. Madan ac room me apne mathe par aaye pasine ko pochhte huye.... Sorry
Bakshi.... Arrre arree .. Ghabra kyon rahe hain, aap dr itne serious kyon hote ho. Paisa, paisa paisa. Subah 10am baje aate ho, din bhar patient kaise aaye, kitne aaye, raat ke kabhi 1am kabhi 2am baje jate ho. Sote ho aur taiyar hokar fir wapas 10am baje yahan. Paisa hai, bada naam bhi hai, par na to chehre par hansi aur na social life.
Madan.... Aap ne to humare profession ko he nanga kar diya, par hum kar bhi kya sakte hain. Ab aap khud ko he le lijiye, humara to phir bhi ghar hai, aap ko to ghar bhi nasib nahi.
Bakshi.... Ohhh hoo ! Nahle par dahla, dr saab hum bhatke log ka bhale thikana nahi, par humari team humara pariwar hai, aur hum kaam ko enjoy karte hain, aur aap dr ki community mostly serious he hoti hai.
Madan.... Sabhi nahi hote...
Bakshi.... To mante hai na jyada'tar hote hain. Khair jane dijiye isse, aap kuch chidhe najar aane lage. Aap kuch puchh rahe the mujh se..
Madan... Ab sir baat sahi ho ya galat par apne profession ke bade me koi kuch kahe to bura to lagta hai na. Main manta hun humara koi social life nahi par hum zindgiyan bachate hain, ye bhi to dekhiye.
Bakshi.... Oops ! Aap kuch puchh rahe hain ya main puchhun ...
Madan... Ha ha ha, main ye jan'na chah raha tha Bakshi sir, aap jaise adhikari ko ek mujrim me kyon intrest hai.
Bakshi.... Ha ha ha, Govt. hume paise mujrim me intrest rakhne ke liye he deti hai, partiyon me photo khinchwane ke liye nahi. Main samjh raha hun aap ke sawal ki gahrayi ko, par iss ka jabaw aap ko tv aur news se mil jayega, kabhi na kabhi, sayad uss waqt bhi humara naam wahan nahi ho par humara kaam jaroor dikhega.
Madan.... Samjh gaya sir...
Bakshi.... Ab aap kuch andaje se bata sakte hain, isko hosh kab tak aayega.
Madan.... Sir jis gambhir roop se ghayal hai, mere khayal se kam se kam 15/20 din lag jayenge.
Bakshi.... Phir phasa diya dr, ye Anu kahan hai, use urgently yahan bulaeye....
Madan.... Aap Anu ko kaise jante hain...
Bakshi.... Dr saab aap sawal bahut karte hain, meri rai maniye, aap koi baat nahi janiye yahi achha hai, kyonki jitna jan'ne ki kosis karenge utna he ulajh kar rah jayen'ge.
Madan.... Thik hai sir, main call kar ke inform kar deta hun...
Bakshi ek gahri sans leta huye .... "Phasa diya iss dr ne".
Mann me kuch sanka ke sath Bakwhi apni waki on karta hai....... Idhar Bakshi ke dusre sathi aapas me waki par lage the...
Sumit.... Janu, ander uss mare ko kya dekh rahi ho, upar kaphi garmi hai .. Jarra aakar aankhon ko thandak to pahuncha do.
Suchitra..... Pichhli baar ka maar bhul gaya kya Sumit, kaise maar khaya tha ek call girl se... Jutiyan.. Jutiyan ... Maar maar ke sir laal kar di thi.
In logon ka ek aur sathi Naman jo upar chhat par sniper ke sath tha .... Kaphi jor se haste huye ..... Suchitra, wo kyon bhul gayi kahna, bajar me nanga bhaga bhaga kar mari thi......
Sumit..... Bakwas band karo, main to bas apni duty kar raha tha wahan... Ab kabhi-kabhi galtiyan ho jati hai.... Oye .. Naman ... Ek goli bhejun kya, mere nishane par he hai, sale sara mazak karne ki aadat nikal jayegi.....
Suchitra.... Jane de naman, iski aankhon ke sath ab dimag ko bhi thandak mil gayi hogi....
Nigrani ke sath sab aapas ki khicha tani me lage huye the... Waki par Bakshi bhi sab ki baten sun raha tha.... Bakshi sab se baat karte huye ....
"Khilte hain gul yahan. Sumit beta kya gul khila raha hai chhat par"
Sumit..... Sorry sir,
Bakshi..... Naman aur Schitra, tum dono uss baat ke liye kabhi mazak mat kiya karo, jis se kisi ko taklif ho... Sumit ko mere instruction the, isliye wo ghatna china market me hui....
"Ab sab dhyan se suno, hum high risk point par hain, aur Sahil ko hosh me aane me abhi ek week se upar lagega. Main chahta hun Sumit tum H.Q inform kar ke air ambulance bulwa lo, hum ambulence aate he yahan se nikal jayenge. Main yahan rukne ka risk nahi le sakte, bas wo Anu jaldi chali aaye.
Takriban aadhe ghante ke baad Anu pahunchi ward 2 me....
Bakshi.... Ye husn ye ada, aap to bilkul nahi badli miss ya mrs Anu...
Anu.... Bakshi sir aap ko jo chahiye tha wo to mil gaya na phir mujhe kyon padesan kar rahe hain.
"Hello sir ... Helloooo ... Sir kya aap sun rahe hain"
Bakshi, Anu ko shant rahne ka ishara karte huye.... Haan sumit...
Sumit.... Sir, gate no.2 ke east, 1/2 km dur kuch movement hai, i repeat ... Kuch movement hai.
Bakshi... Copy that ... All team mate alert .... Keep bulls eye and wait for my msg..... Suchitra .. Singal jammer lagao, abhi iss ilake me.... Prakash ... Tumhare range me koi infalmable hai ...
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Bakshi... Copy that ... All team mate alert .... Keep bulls eye and wait for my msg..... Suchitra .. Singal jammer lagao, abhi iss ilake me.... Prakash ... Tumhare range me koi infalmable hai ...
Prakash.... Yes sir ..
Bakshi.... Shoot them right now, ... Sumit uske shoot hote he unki movement chek karo, aur koi mujhe batayega air ambulence ab tak kyon nahi aaya.
Sumit... Sir, on the way hai, 5.30pm inki arriving time hai....
Bakshi.... 15 min ka samay, hold on Sumit .... Tum dono kya naam hai tumhara...
"Saurav aur Hasan... Naam hai"
Bakshi... Kyon miyan itna attitude wo bhi war zone me. Suno tum dono, ye ek waki rakho ... Aur is ward ke sare patient aur dr, maujood jitne bhi log hain, sab ko ground floor me pichhe ki ore shift karwao... Aur gate par khadey hokar wahan ki harkaton ko dekho ...
Sumit.... Sir, they are high tech, i repeat they are high tech.
Bakshi.... Copy that, kya movement hai..
Sumit... Sir unke pass remote acess flying bomb hai... Aur takriban 40 hain jo hum se 400 meter ki duri par hai .....
Bakshi .... Alert all team ... Hum 10min me nahi nikal sakte. Leave your position and everybody come here. I repeat leave your position and come together.
Sab logon ke sath, Saurav aur Hasan bhi ward 2 ke pass aaya aur dr Mdan ki kismat, wo bhi ward 2 me dekhne chala aaya, ki ho kya raha hai.
Bakshi..... Thanks Dr Madan aap humari help ke liye aaye. Tum dono ... (Saurav aur Hasan ko kahte huye) .. In dono drs ke sath apne dost ko ward se bahar nikalo hume abhi turant hospital se nikalna hai ...
"Sumit .. Air ambulence ko wapas lautne bolo .... Naman ... Prakash .. Capture the main gate ... Suchitra apni location bhejho aur military help maango. Aruv , tumhe pata hai na un bomb ko kabtak humse dur rakhna hai .... Do it immidietly. Sumit rescue mission start .. Hume yahan se Sahil ko surkshit nikalna hai ..... Chalo fast" .....
Sare instruction sab ko mil chuke the, Aruv jo Bakshi ke sath tha, usne turant kuch paper aur carten liye aur usme aag laga di. Dhuyen ke karan fly bomb ke lage camre ki visbility khatam ho gayi. Sumit ka aankra bahut he galat tha, kyonki 40 to kewal ek side se tha, pure hospital me 150 se jyada flying bomb the.
Ek flying bomb ko unhone blast karwa kar apni mansa jahir kar di. Dhamka kaphi tej tha, aur 200 meter redius ka area saaf kar diya...
Bakshi.... Sumit, yahan hospil me maujood sabhi logon ki jaan phas gayi hai, wo pure hospital ko blast kar sakte hain ... Aruv ... Kitne percent chance hai ki hum inko jahir kar ke bhage aur bach jaye.
Aruv.... Sahidon ke khoon se yadi laal honi hai dharti to hum lad kar kyon na mare sir, bhag kar kyon.
Bakshi.... Abhi marne ka time nahi hai Aruv, lade bhi to kya hasil hoga, apne sath kayi civilians ki jaan jayegi. Colletral damage ka kuch andaza bhi hai, ab jo bola wo batao...
Arubh... Sir depend karta hai, main inhe 10 min tak roke rakh sakta hun.
Hasan.... Sir, main 10 min ke baad ki jimmedari meri
Bakhi.... Ab tu kaun sa mechanical engeneer hai jo ye bol raha hai.
Sare team mates aur mari si haalat me Sahil, uske sath roti hui Anu aur dar se kanpta Dr Madan, sab ek jagah the.
Hasan.... Sir, abhi baton ka time nahi hai ... Hume nikalna hai. Pahle ke 10 min aap logon ka baad ka mera raha . Saurav chal gariyan late hain
Bakshi.... All team mates .. Give him cover fire ...
Sab log chhipte-chhipate nikle gate se bahar aur piller ke pichhe chhipe rahe, Hasan aur Saurav gariyan lene bahar nikle... Idhar flying bomb ke camre se unka dhyan batane ke liye sabhi surksha adhikariyon ne apni position leli .. Urte flying bomb par pahla nisana .... Boom....
Sniper ki firing west se hoti rahi ... Aur north ki ore se Hasan aur Saurav gariyan la rahe the ... Sab bade mazakiya andaz me, usne kitne bomb shoot kar ke gira diye ye bhi counting kar rahe the..... Aur dusron ne kitne bomb ko nisana lagaya.
Prakash ..... Oh my god ... Gaye kaam se ...
Naman... Ohhh shit ... Ab ye kya hai, ek admi ko marne ke liye pure sahar bhar ka barood ....
Upar saikron ki tadaat me flying bomb ek sath aa rahe the ... Ek me dhamak ka matlab sare ek sath visphot .. Aur itna bada visphot hota ki uss se ye log bhi nahi bach pate.
Bakshi... Remote access kahin aur bhi hai, tumhari information wrong thi Sumit, bahar kahin aur se bhi najar rakhi ja rahi hai ......
Kahin dur baithe hamlawar ......
"Yaar ye kamaal ki maal hai ... Is par main bomb giraunga".... Achanak he Suchitra ki ore teji se urta hua ek bomb ... Bilkul passs aa raha tha ki Aruv ne aag bujhane wali cylender ka istaal kiya ... Us bomb ke aage white pura aur Aruv ne Suchitra ko wahan se hata liya....
Hamlwar 1.... Kahan gayi wo ....
Hamlwar 2..... Chuk gaye hum, sale bhut hosiyar hai ... Kah to pura hospital he ura deta hun ..
Hamlawar 1..... Sale kam akal, ye baat pahle kyon nai batayi... Bekar he ye chhote chhot bomb se happy deewali kar rahe hain ... Chal koi bada dhamaka karte hain ....
Hamlawar 1 ne apna laptop liya... Van ka roof khola aur .. Area locate karne laga .... Dhatt yaar jaroorat se jyada chalak nikle .. Signal jam chal raha hai, area locate nahi ho pa raha...
Hamlawar 2 .... Thik hai ... Ruk uss softwere wale padhe likhe ka kaam hai .... Dono ek softwere engeneer ko awaz dete ..... Sun oye padhe likhe gawar .. Iss bomb ka area locate kar hospial me aur kaam khatam karte hain....
Softwere engeneer... Dekha main kitna jaroori hun .......
Idhar hospital me dono ko gariyan mil chuki thi ... Ab bari thi tukriyon me batne ki....
Saurav ke pass ambulence tha, aur usme Bakshi, Anu, Madam aur Prakash ko jana tha.... Sumit, Aruv, Naman, Hasan aur Suchitra car me....
Bakshi... Inki movement dhimi kyon ho gayi....
Aruv... Kyonki 5 min me hospital urne wala hai, jammer ke signal ko weak kar rahe hain, 5 min me area locate ho jayega.....
Bakshi... Tujh se to jyada padha likha unki gange me hai, roko usse...
Aruv... Nahi ho sakta... Kyonki wo log pahle he server me ghus chuke hain
Bakshi.... Come on team ab chalo. Prakash .. Dikha do unhe ki hum nikal rahe hain....
Prakash ne ek hand granet ka dhamaka kiya ... Humla karne walon ke camre me jaise he ye feature hua... Dono humlawar uss softwere engeneer ko akela chhor screen dekhne lage .. Aur flying bomb access karne lage ...
Teji se dono griyan gate par lagi .... Gate par gari lagte he wo dono humlawar chillaye... "jaldi kar ye sab bhag rahe hain"
Aruv ne ek smoke bomb chhora, charon taraph dhuan he dhuan ... Dono hamlawar ne kayi flying bomb chhor diye ... Uss bomb ke baad jab dhuan shant hua ... To unhe 2 gariyn chithron me dikhi .... Sab jeet ka khushi manate huye .... Apne hathon me sarab utha'te huye .... "Mar gaye sale"....
06-01-2018, 02:20 AM (This post was last modified: 06-01-2018, 02:20 AM by rishiraj.)
Honey boy yaar ye story ki starting to achi hain par story kuch samajh hi nahi aa rahi ye kaisi shurat hain are bhai aisa kuch update to do ki pata chale ki aisa hua tha isliye ye sab hua
(06-01-2018, 02:20 AM)rishiraj : Honey boy yaar ye story ki starting to achi hain par story kuch samajh hi nahi aa rahi ye kaisi shurat hain are bhai aisa kuch update to do ki pata chale ki aisa hua tha isliye ye sab hua