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Goongiiiii BehnAaaa


Hi dosto…

kaise hain?

Aaj new kahani ley kar aya hoon aap sab k liye, umeed karta hoon k ye story meri pheli story ki tarah completed rahey… shukriya

Ye story 1 bahi aur behan k mutaliq hai. Bachpaan mein behan bahi k ghar wale (chacha, chachi, mama, mami, aur maa) ka road accident ki waja se inteqal ho gya tha.

Maa k marne k baad baap ne apne dono bachoon ki daikh bhal ki.

Baap ko shayad ye andaza tha k jald wo b apne baachoon ko chor kar apne bachoon ki maa k pas chala jaye ga isi liye us ne dono behan bahi ko matti k bartan banana seekhana shuru kar diya tha.


Is kaam ko dono bache dil jami se seekhtey rahe aur is kam mein wo maharat hasil kartey chale gaye…


Bahi behan dono mein behead piyar tha, bahi apni behna ki har baat bina mangey poori kar deta tha q k.. us ki behan bool nahi sakti thi, bahi har tareeqe se apni behan ko khush rakhne ki poori koshish karta rehta tha, qudrat ki setam zareefi ye thi k road accident mein us bahi ki behan ne bolna chor diya tha…


Wo din aur aaj ka din… bahi apni behan ki har khuwaish kisi na kisi tareeqe se poori karne mein juta rehta tha…


Behan thi b bohat piyari… bohat khubsorat… naat khat… chulbuli… choone par foran daghdaar hone wali jaisi khusboorati thi us k pas… banana wale ne kiya soch kar us ki behan ko banaya ho ga…


Bahi b gaoon mein kisi hero se kam nahi tha… qudrati afaat se lartey lartey usey waqat se pheley hi mature bana diya tha waqat ne…


Wo khud apni behan ki tarah khubsorat tha… 

khubsorat neeli aankhoon ka malik tha wo…

 bila ki teezi us mein thi… 

us mein koot koot kar aqal-maandi bhari hoi thi.. 

har waqat kuch neya hi socha karta tha… apni behan ko hansane k liye har waqat kuch na kuch aesa suna diya karta tha jis se us ki behan ki hansi k sath sath us k baap ki hansi b ruka nahi karti thi…


Bachpan se hi wo har jins-e-mukhalif (females) ki aankh ka tara tha wo… us ka har koi dost ban’ne ki chah liye howe tha jise wo hans kar qabool kar leta tha lekin ye dosti ghar se bahir gaoon k maidan mein rehti thi…


Gaoon k har fard k liye wo jaan ka tara tha, q na hota… wo har kisi ka kam apna kam chor kar karta tha…


Isi tarah waqat ghuzrta gya, dono behan bahi barey hotey gaye aur waqat ne achanak 1 aur zordar thokar un ki zindagi mein dey mari… un ka baap un ki hansti khailti zindagi mein phir se wohi din dey gya jin se wo abhi abhi ubhrey thy… abhi to unhoon ne hansna khailna shuru kiya tha…


Dono behan bahi k liye bina baap k zindagi ghuzarna mushkil tha lekin phir b unhoon ne qudrat k faisloon khud ko bebaas hone na diya…


Behan shuru k din roti rehti thi lekin 1 din bahi ne khud sambhal liya q k usey aab bara bahi ban kar rehna tha… ghar ka sarbraah ban kar barey barey faisle jo karne thy…


Ghar ko chalane k liye paisoon ka bandobast jo karna tha… ghar ki dal rooti ko daikhna tha… zareya rozgaar ko phir se sambhalna jo tha…


Aur sab se barri aur aham bat… apni behan ko sambhalan jo tha… aur kuch saaloon k baad apni behan ki shadi b karna thi… 


jo bachpan mein baap ne apne gaoon k sarpanch k betey se is soode mein tae kar di thi k us (sarpanch) ki beti Maria, apne bête Usman k sath shadi kar k sarpanch k ghar, ghar – jamai ban kar rahey ga aur isi tarah usman ki goongi behan, (Sonia) sarphanch k Seede Saada se betey (dimaghi tor par khud ko child samjhna) Nawaz se Shadi tae kar di thi.



(ye kahani basically, usman aur Sonia k darmiyaan hi rahe gi… lekin is kahani mein maria ka b kuch na kuch kardaar rahe ga aur khas kar laalchi sarpanch ka…)

Update 1


Usman aur Sonia dono ki umar hasb-e-mamool (usman) 25 saal aur (Sonia) 21 saal ho chuki thi


Usman rozana ki tarah subh saweere uthne k baad apne beal gaari par apna sara saman load karta hai aur gaon k bazar mein ja kar bechna shuru kar daita hai, din ko wahien se kuch na kuch kha leta tha, sham ko 3 baje k baad ghar pohanchta tha aur kuch dair araam karne k baad phir se mehnat mazdoori karne lag jata.


Baap k ghuzar jane k gham mein doobi Sonia apne piyare bahi ki khiyaal na rakh pa rahi thi. Is ka wazeeha sabot yehi tha k usman subh saweere beghair khana khaye kam par chala jata tha aur wahien par din ka khana kha kar aa jata tha. Sham ko khud hi khana bana kar kha liya karta tha…


Sonia k muuh k samne khane ki thal parri ki parri reh jati lekin baap ki moot ne usey shaded rangeeda kar diya tha jis ki waja se wo khud ka b dehan nahi rakh rahi thi aur na hi apne pushti kam ka…


1 din sham ko usman apne kam mein masroof tha tabhi usman ki mangetar maria un k chotey se ghar mein dakhil hoi.


Maria: hey rabbaaaa… (thora zor se boltey howe) is larki ne ghar ka kabarra kar k rakh diya hai… na bartan saaf hain… na peene ko saaf pani hai… aur to aur khud ko kamzoor bana dala hai…


Maria ki sakht lekin hamdardana baatien sun kar usman ghar ki chokhat par aa kar maria aur Sonia ko daikhne laga.


Maria ki baatien sun kar Sonia ne apna sar apne gutnoon mein daba liya. Tab usman bola


Usman: kiyun bechari ko tang karti ho Maria… abhi bachi hai… kuch din mein theak ho jaye gi… aur phir se waise purani wali… humari nut khat… chulbuli c Sonia ban jaye gi
Hay na … soniaaaaaaaaaa


Usman ne barrey piyar se apni ladli behan ko pachkara jis par maria mand mand muskrane lagi, maria sach mein usman se sachi mohabat karne lagi thi lekin kabhi kabhi us k dil mein apne baap jaisi chalaki umaad ati thi, lekin is waqat wo apne Hero k dil mein apni bhabi aur naand k liye piyar ko daikh kar muskra rahi thi



Sonia ne apne piyare bahi ki baat sun kar apna chehra guthne se upper uthaya aur foran zameen se uthne k baad seedha apne bahi k gale lag kar rone lagi…



Sonia ko seene se lagey howe daikh kar bahi b kuch na kuch aab-deeda ho chala tha lekin bahi ne khud ko sambhalne k liye phele se hi soch rakha tha is liye wo apni laadli behan ko piyar se pachkarne laga…


Usman: arreyyyyyy … meri piyari behana… phir se rone lagi ho… aab to rona band kar dey… itna roye gi to bidaai par rona nahi aye ga


(usman ko ilaam tha k us ki behan apni shadi ki baat sun kar zaroor sharmaye gi)
Wohi howa jis k liye usman mashoor tha… Sonia rotey rotey sharmane lagi… wo apne bahi se foran alag ho kar apni shikwa kana ankhoon se bahi ko daikhne lagi jis mein saaf saaf likha tha


Sonia: bahiiiii… tum bohat gande ho… abhi to baap ko ghuzre kuch din nahi howe… aur tumhien meri shadi ki fikr satane lagi hai… jao mein tum se baat nahi karti…
Sonia ki ankhoon ki baat ko samjhtey howe usman ne foran apni behan ko apne mazboot bazoon k hasaar mein qaid kar liya.


Usman: arreeee… itne ziyada shikwe na kiya kar pagli… warna teri bhabi jalne lage gi


Usman ne itna bol kar Sonia ko pakar kar khud se alag kiya aur us k mathey (forehead) par chota sa kiss dene k baad chor diya aur wapis ghar se bahir jatey howe bola


Usman: Maria… apni behan ko sambhalo, aur samjhana… k mar jane waloon k sath mara nahi jata

Gud Start

(18-04-2018, 04:41 PM)dpmangla : Gud Start

thanks dost

Update No. 2



Agli subha se Sonia mamool k mutabiq ghar k kaam karne lag gai. Subh k nashte se ley kar raat k khane tak wo hark am pheley ki tarah karne lagi thi farak sirf itna tha k wo ghar k kam kaj k doran apne baap k khiyaaloon mein kho jaya karti thi.
Jis tarah Sonia ko apne baap k ghuzar jane ka gham tha waise hi Usman ko b tha lekin Usman ki kahi baat sach hi to thi…


‘‘Mar jane waloon k sath Mara nahi jata…’’ isi tarah har insan dosre insan k chale jane k baad 1 jaga ruk nahi jata bal k agey barhta hai beshak usey kuch waqat lagta hai agey barhne ko lekin jitna waqat Sonia ley rahi thi utna waqat koi b nahi leta…


Kuch dinoon k baad Sonia ki ghar k kaamoon mein tawajo pheli ki tarah ho gai, aur wo usman ki madad b karne lagi thi, dono behan bahi mil kar phir se apni zindagi ko agey barhana shuru kar diya tha.


Sham ko wapsi par usman gaon k akhiri ghar k pas se susat raftari se pedal ghuzar raha tha (q k aaj us ki garri kharab ho gai thi)  tab usey Omair k ghar se kuch awazien sunai dene lagi. Usman in awazoon se na-waqif tha. 


Gaon mein aksar tu tu main main aur dabe alfaz mein bolne jaisi awazien sun’ne ko milti hi rehti thi lekin Omair (Usman k bachpan ka muh bola dost) k ghar se kuch naye awazien sun’ney ko mil rahi thien.


Usman ne kuch seconds mein in awazoon ko qareeb se sun’ney ka irada bana liya tha. Kuch hi dair mein usman omair k ghar k qareeb pohanch chukka tha. 


Aaaahhhhhh aaaaahhhhh aur tezzzzz aaaahhhhhh teezzzzz tezzzzz karo uuuuffffff aaaaahhhhh aaaaaa aaaaaa haaaaeeeee shabashhhhhhh uuuufffff oooohhh aaaaaa aaaaaa uuuuuiiiiii.


Usman aesi dabi dabi awazoon ko sun’ney k baad mazeed tajasoos mein doob kar ghar ki kisi khirki ko dhoondney laga. Jald hi usey ghar k pechley hisey mein kuch lakriyoon ka daer nazar aya jis se charh kar wo khirki se andar daikh sakta tha.
Usman ki ankhoon k samney Omair ki walida (Mom) neechey se mukamal nangi ho kar Umar k walid se chudwa rahi thi




Omair ki walida ki umer (age) us waqat round about 40 thi. Un ka sirf 1 beata tha Omair. Omair ki age 18 saal thi. Jab k umar ki age 19 saal thi. Umar k walid Ansar 1 school k peon thy.


Shayad achi Salary ki waja se Omair ki walida Khala Jamila Chacha Ansar se chudwa rahi thi. Ye sari thinking mere zehan mein foran aai. Q k mein ne aksar chacha ko khala k sath baatien karte daikha tha.


Khala aksar chacha ansar ki dono beatiyoon k sath bazar mein daikha karta tha lekin mera zehan is taraf kabhi b nahi gya tha. K chacha khala ko chodne k baad ya pheley tohfey diya kartey thy.


Chacha ki barri beati Tania aur Umar ki shadi ho chuki thi. Umar ki BV Tanzila kali aur motti c larki thi.

Tania


Tanzila


Jaise jaise chacha aur khala ki chudai agey barhti gai mere rongtey khare hotey chale gaye.


Zindagi mein pheli martaba aesa khail khailtey howe kisi anjaan ko daikha aur wo b aesey chup chupa kar.


Khala k ghar mein chal rahey is chudai k khail se khala ki awazien mazeed tezz hoti chali gai. Mujhy aesa laga jaise khala aur chacha aab bas jharrne k behead qareeb hain q k khala chacha ko aur zor lagane ka bar bar bol rahi thi.


Wo Siskiyan leti hoi chacha k dhakon ka jawab apni gaand utha kar de rahi thi.
Chacha k farig hote hi Khala ne apni tangen seedhi ki aur chacha us k upar aesey gire jaise Un k jism se jaan nikal gai ho

Khala ne Chacha ko jaldi se apni bahon mein bhar liya aur Chacha ki kamar par apne haath phairne lagi. Khala: “Bas ho gaya’’


Jaise hi chacha relax ho kar khala k jisam se alag howe khala charpai par seedhi ho kar leat gai. Chacha foran uthey aur kaprey pehan kar ghar se bahir nikel gaye. Mein khala ki nangi tangoon mein aesa khoya howa tha k mujhy ilaam hi na howa k kab khala ne mujhy daikh liya tha.


Jab mujhy ye ehsaas howa k khala b mujhy musalsaal daikhey ja rahi hain to mein foran gharbra sa gya. Lekin khala k chehre par kamini muskan daikh kar mein apni jaga se na hila.


Mein yeh sochey jar aha tha k agar khala ko mera yuh chup kar daikhna bura lagta to wo shor machati ya chacha ko bata daiti. Lekin aesa na howa.


Hairangi wali yeh b baat thi k wo khud ko meri nazaroon se chupane ki koshish b nahi kar rahi thein.


Mujh se Khala Jamila ki kamini muskan daikhi na gai to mein foran sar jhuka kar lakriyoon dhaer se neechey utar kar apne ghar ki taraf chal diya.
Aab roz ka mamool ban gya tha jab b mein khala jamila k ghar k pas se ghuzrta to mujhy khala jamila chudtey howe mere zehan mein aney lagien. Halan k wo sham k waqat ghar ki chokhat par nazar ati thi mujhy. Un k chehrey par kamini muskan mujh se daikhi na jati.


Is liye mein apna sar jhuka kar wahan se nikal ata.


1 din Sonia ki tabiyaat kuch kharab thi is liye mein ne Sonia ko ghar k kisi b kam karne se rok diya aur kam par jatey waqat Sonia ki daikh bhal Chachi Nazia karne ka bol aya tha.


Chachi Nazia 35 saal ki shadi shuda auraat hain. Un k shohar shehar mein Bank casher hain. Un ki shadi ko 10 saal ho chukkey hain lekin un k ghar 1 b bacha paida nahi howa. Is liye wo hum dono se sab se ziyada piyar karti hain.


Chachi Nazia 35 saal ki umer mein b Jawan nazar ati thi. Shayad un ki jawani aur khubsorati ka raz un k shohar se chudawana tha ya kuch aur maloom nahi. Lekin wo poore gaoon mein sab se ziyada behtreen dressing kiya karti thi. Un ka ghar sab gharoon mein se sab se ziyada saaf suthra rehta tha.


Jab mein gaon ki market pohancha to daikha k hotel k bahir kafi beehr jama thi. Pta karna par maloom chala k hotel wale k ghar fotagi ho gai hai is liye sab us k ghar jane ki salah mashwara kar rahey hain.


Jab mujh se pocha to mein ne inkar kar diya q k mujhy Sonia k liye duai (medicine) aur kuch taza phaal b khareedne thy.


Din k waqat jab mujhy bhook lagi to mein ne socha k aaj gahak kam hain to kiyoon ne aaj ghar ja kar Sonia ko b daikh loon aur khana b ghar ka kha loon ga.

Nice Post

(19-04-2018, 05:04 PM)dpmangla : Nice Post

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aese hi sath banaye rakhiye ga