Ha bhai ab kahani likho gay yanhi

(31-05-2017, 02:44 PM)$$ : nice update. Ab aage b update kr do yar.

(19-06-2017, 03:30 PM)dpmangla : Update this site Dear

(20-06-2017, 04:02 PM)urc4me : Update dete raho.

(02-07-2017, 05:29 PM)dpmangla : Update it, More than 1 Month has passed

(08-07-2017, 09:41 PM)rajbr1981 : plz continue kre

(11-04-2018, 10:58 PM)Hk47# : Bhai update de do please yaar kahani bohot achi hai yaar please

(15-05-2018, 03:26 PM)Hk47# : Ha bhai ab kahani likho gay yanhi

Dosto mai jald hi is kahani ko aage badane wala hu... To kahani ke sath bane rahiyega....

Ok bhai jaldi ha bhai

(24-05-2017, 08:20 PM)studboyripzy :

Ashu Asif ka hath apne muh se hata ke behad gusse uth ke room se bahar jaane lagti hai... Asif uska hath pakad ke use jaane se rok ta hai...
Ashu : Asif choro mujhe... Aaj to main maa se jhagda kar ke rahungi... Wo aise tumhe roz zaleel kyun karti hai...? Tum unke bate ho sautele hue to kya hua beta to beta hota hai...? Koi maa is tarha apne bete ko manhoos keh ke zaleel nahi karti... Wo kyun karti hai aisa bartaav tumhare sath...? Aaj to unhe iska jawaab dena hi padega...
Asif : Nahi Ashu... Tum unse kuch nahi kahogi....
Ashu : kyun nahi kahungi...? Aaj to main unhe chorne waali nahi wo mere Smarty ke sath aisa kyun karti hai ye unhe batana hi padega...? Aakhir kya bigada hai tum ne unka jo wo tumhare sath aisa karti hain...?
Asif : Ashu tumhe meri kasam tum maa se kuch nahi kahogi... Wo maa hai aur ek maa ko apne bete ko kuch bhi kehne ka poora haq hai... Agar unhe mujhe manhoos kehne se khushi milti hai to kehne do... Maa ki khushi ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...
Ashu : Tum na bahut kharaab ho... Hamesha mujhe apni kasam de ke rok lete ho... Jaao mujhe nahi baat karni tumse...
Ye keh ke Ashu gusse me muh phula ke bed pe baith jaati hai... Asif pyar se uske gusse se laal chehre ko dekh ke kehta hai...
Asif : Hai... Meri Gudiya (Ashu) gusse me badi pyari lagti hai...
Ashu : Maine kaha na mujhse baat mat karo... Main tumse naraaz hoon...
Asif : Ashu... Tu mujh se naraaz ho jaayegi to main jiyunga kaise... Main to mar.....
Abhi Asif itna hi keh paaya tha ki Ashu ne foran apna hath uske muh pe rakh ke uska muh band kar diya...
Ashu : Khabardaar jo tumne dubara aisa kaha to mujhse bura koi na hoga... Agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to.... Main to mar hi jaaungi... Kaise jiyungi main tumhare bina...
Ye keh ke Ashu rone lagti hai...
Asif use apne seene se laga ke chup karane lagta hai...

update 10

Asif : Nahi kahunga... Phir kabhi nahi kahunga... Please chup ho jaa... Mat ro please... Dekh tu chup na hui to main bhi ro dunga... Tu jaanti hai na ki main tujhe rote hue nahi dekh sakta... 
Ye kehte kehte Asif ki aankhen bhi nam ho jaati hain aur uski aankhon se bhi aansu behne lagte hain... Asif ki aankhon me aansu dekh ke Ashu foran chup ho jaati hai wo Asif ki aankhon se aansu poch ke kehti hai... 
Ashu : Nahi... Tumhe meri kasam hai jo tum roye to...? Main sach me tum se hamesha ke liye naraaz ho jaaungi... 
Asif : To iska matlab tu abhi mujhse naraaz nahi thi...? 
Ashu : Nahi... 
Asif : kya......?
Ashu : Nahi.... Mera matlab hai hai haan... 
Asif : kya kaha haan...? Matlab tu mujhse naraaz hai... 
Ashu : Nahi.... Matlab thi... Matlab nahi thi... 
Ashu ki baat sun ke Asif zor zor se hasne lagta hai....
Hahahahaha....
Asif ko yun hasta dekh Ashu bhi hasne lagti hai... 
Ashu : Tum bhi na... Rote hue ko kaise hasaya jaaye tumhe achche se pata hai...
Ye keh ke Ashu Asif ke seene se lag jaati hai... 
Aisa hi hai dono ka pyar.... Dono ladte hain jhagadte hain... Roothte hain manate hain... Hamesha Ek dusre ke sath rehte hain... Dono ko ek dusre ki choti se choti cheez ka bada khayaal rehta hai... Dono ko ek dusre ki baahon me bada sukoon milta hai... Ashu ke seene se lagte hi Asif apne saare gum saari takleef bhool jaata hai... 
Bachpan se hi dono ko ek dusre se bada lagaav raha hai... Dono kahin bhi jaate to ek sath... Dono ek dusre ke bina ek pal nahi reh sakte... Agar koi anjaan saks unhe dek le to unhe lovers hi samjhega... Dono ka rishta hi kuch aisa hai... Dono ek dusre pe jaan chidakte hain...
Dono is waqt ek dusre ke seene se lage is duniya se bekhabar kisi aur hi duniya me khoye hue the....
Ki tabhi Achanak Saba ki aawaaz sun ke dono chonk jaate hain...

update 11

Achanak Maa ki aawaaz sun ke dono chonk jaate hain...
Asif Ashu se alag hone lagta hai magar Ashu hai ki uske seene se alag hone ko taiyaar hi nahi... Asif jitna use khud se dur karne ki koshish kar raha hai Ashu utna hi us ke seene se lipat rahi hai... 
Asif : Ashu kya kar rahi ho...? Choro na...? 
Ashu : Nahi... 
Asif : Ashu dekho maa aa jaayegi... 
Ashu : Aane do... Main kya darti hoon un se...?
Asif : Ashu dekh der ho rahi hai... Pehle din late hona achchi baat nahi...
Ashu : Maine kaha na nahi matlab nahi... Na hi mujhe tumse alag hona hai aur na hi kahin jaana hai... Tumhare seene se lag ke mujhe bada sukoon milta hai... Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki main jannat me hoon... Main pagal nahi hoon jo apni jannat ko chor doon... 
Asif : Ashu ye kya bachpana hai...? Choro mujhe... Mera aaj pehla din hai College me aur pehle din main late nahi hona chahta...
Ashu use kas ke apni baahon le ke kehti hai... 
Ashu : Nahi... Chahe jo ho... Main to nahi chorungi tumhe... Kya mera tum pe itna bhi haq nahi ki main tumhe gale laga sakun...? Tumhe pyar kar sakoon...? 
Tabhi achanak room ke bahar se Saba ki aawaaz sun ke Asif use ek jhatke se alag karke kehta hai... 
Asif : kaisi baat kar rahi ho Ashu tumhe mujhpe poora haq hai... Lekin abhi waqt nahi hai humare paas hum late ho rahe hain... Tumhe School jaana hai aur mujhe College... Jiske liye hum ko taiyaar bhi hona hai... Tumhe jitna pyar karna ho shaam ko kar lena... Abhi nahi... Chalo jaldi Maa bula rahi hai... Agar unhe ye pata chala ki hum abhi tak taiyaar nahi huye to shamjh lo ki shaamat aa gayi... Unka gussa to tum jaanti ho... 
Ashu : Theek hai... Abhi to main tumhe chor deti hoon par shaam ko tumhe iski poori bharpaayi karni padegi... Agar shaam ko tumne aanakaani ki to dekh lena...

update 12

Asif : Achcha meri maa shaam ko jo chahe kar lena main mana nahi karunga... Ab jaa aur Jaldi se taiyaar ho jaa... 
Ashu muskura ke Asif ke gaal pe kiss karke kehti hai 
"Love you Smarty....."
Aur phir school ke liye taiyaar hone chali jaati hai...
Asif bhi ready hone chala jaata hai... 
Ready hoke wo nashta karne ke liye sab ke sath baith jaata hai... 
Dad nashta kar ke office ke liye jaa chuke hain aur maa kitchen me kaam kar rahi hai... 
Idhar Asif nashta karte karte hairat se Simi ko bade gaur se dekh raha hai... Use aaj Simi me bahut badlaav nazar aa raha hai... Jo Simi hamesha nashte ki table pe us se ladti hai wo aaj baar baar use dekh ke muskura rahi hai... Aakhir achanak is badlaav ki wajah kya hai...? Asif abhi ye soch hi raha hai ki tabhi Ashu bol padti hai...
Ashu : kahan kho gaye janaab...? 
Asif : kahin nahi... 
Ashu : To phir Jaldi se nashta khatam karo... Tumhe mujhe School bhi drop karna hai... Main pehle din School me late nahi hona chahti... 
Asif : Ashu aaj main tumhe School drop nahi kar paaunga... Wo kya hai ki tumhara School mere College ki ulti disha me hai... Agar aaj main tumhe School chorne gaya to College me late ho jaaunga... Please aaj tum Simi ke sath chali jaao... Kal se main pakka roz tumhe School chor dunga... 
Asif ki baat sun ke Ashu apna muh bana ke kehti hai... 
Ashu : Tum kya chahte ho ki main akeli School jaaun...? 
Asif : Tum akeli kahan ho Simi hai na tumhare sath... 
Ashu : Tum kya chahte ho ki hum do ladkiyaan akeli School jaaye...? Agar raste me hum ko kuch ho gaya to...? Tumhe pata hai Zamana kitna kharaab hai... Na baba na main to akeli School nahi jaaungi... Main School jaaungi to tumhare sath warna nahi jaaungi...

update 13

Asif : Are isme darne ki kya baat hai...? Yahin bagal me to tumhara School hai aur waise bhi tumhara School mere College ki ulti disha me hai... Agar aaj main tumhe School chorne gaya to College me late ho jaaunga... Please tum aaj manage kar lo kal se main pakka tumhe roz School drop kar dunga...
Ashu : Nahi matlab nahi... 
Asif : Please Ashu maan jaa na...
Ashu : Tum mujhse pyar nahi karte agar karte to yun mujhe akeli School jaane ko nahi kehte... 
Asif : Are yaar ab ye baat kahan se beech me aa gayi...? Main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon... 
Ashu : Agar sach me tum mujhe pyar karte ho to chalo phir mujhe School choro... Agar nahi to phir aaj main School nahi jaaungi... 
Asif marta kya na karta use Ashu ki baat maanni padi... Wo Ashu ko naraaz nahi karna chahta tha... Ashu ki naaraazgi us se sehen nahi hoti thi... Ashu ke liye wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai... 
Asif : Chal theek hai... 
Asif ki baat sun ke Ashu behad khush ho jaati hai... 
Ashu : Smarty you are a Darling..
Ye keh ke Ashu uske gaal pe kiss kar deti hai.
Phir nashta khatam karke teeno ghar se nikal jaate hain. 
School pahunch ke Asif dono ko bye bol ke Apne College ke liye jaane lagta hai ki tabhi Simi achanak se Asif ko gale laga ke uske gaal pe kiss karke use thankyou bol ke muskurati hui School me chali jaati hai. Asif Simi ki is achanak harkat pe chonk jaata hai. Use Simi ka ye badla hua roop samajh me nahi aata. Jo Simi hamesha us se bina baat ke bhi ladti rehti hai us Simi ne aaj use apne gale laga ke kiss kiya aur ye hi nahi life me aisa pehli baar hua hai ki Simi ne us ke sath achcha bartaav kiya hai. 
Asif abhi ye soch hi raha tha ki achanak se School ki bell bejti hai. Use ye yaad aata hai ki use bhi college jaana hai. Wo foran College ke liye nikal jaata hai. College pahunch ke wo apni class ki taraf jaane lagta hai ki tabhi.......

To Be Continued...

Bhai update pa kar bohut kuahi mili thanks bhai or update great one hai

Nice One

excellent..it's great job done. plz continue