Others MANHOOS zindagi (A innocent boy)

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.1
Ek chote se ghar me jis me sirf ek kamra tha.....
Aur usi me ek side ek charpai padi thi.....
Ek kone me kuch bartan aur ek kone me toilet bana hua tha......
Toilet me darwaza aur diware sab thi........
Jani ki ek admi ke rehne ke liye bohat tha.......

Subha ke 5 am ka time tha.......
Ek ladka char pai pe so raha tha......
Ki tabhi ghadi pe lagaya hua alarm baj utha.....

Woh ladka alarm mi awaz sun ke uth gya....
Fir usne alarm band kiya aur toilet me ghus gya......

Fir fresh hoke joging suit pehan liya......
Aur nikal gya joging pe......
15 minutes baad woh ek park me pohanch gya.......
Vahan kuch der joging karke thodi bohat dusri exercise karne laga........

Kuch der baad usne exercise band ki.....
Aur chal pada gate ki aur......

Woh gate ke pass pohancha hi tha ki......
Tabhi vahan pe teen logo ki entry hui.......

Un teeno ko dekh ke ladke ke chehre pe muskurahat aa gayi.......

Par jese hi un teeno ki nazar us pe padi.....
Teeno ne muh fer liya aur age badh gaye......
In me se ek admi tha aur bakki do ladkia......

(Yahan me un teeno ko admi aur ladkio ko Lki1 aur Lki2 likhunga......)

Lki1 - pata nahi yeh manhoos kab tak hame apni shakal dikhata rahega......

Admi - pata nahi yeh abhi tak hamre jivan me grehan ki tarha kyu laga hua hai.......

Lki2 - ji karta hai ise yahin pe jaan se .ar dun.....
Aa jata hai subha subha muh utha ke........
Manhoos kahin ka......

Fir woh teeno apni joging karne lag jate hai........

Inke bate us ladke ne bhi sun li......

Woh ladka inki bato ko sun ke muh latka ke gate se bahar chala gya.......

Yeh sab uske liye roj ka tha......
Uske sath yeh sabh kuch roj hota tha.......
Woh ladka ghar pohanch gya tha......

Aur apni maa ki tasveer ko pakad ke use dekhne laga.....
Uski ankhon se ansun behne lage.......

Ladka - maa mujhe kyu chod ke gayi.....
Akhir kya gunha tha mera......
Ek tu hi to thi jo mujhe samjhti thi......
Kyu chod ke gayi mujhe akhir kyu.......
Ab is duniya me main bilkul akela hun.......
Koi mujhe pyar nahi karta.....
Sabhi mujh se nafrat karte hai........
Sabh kehte hai ki me manhoos hun......
Mene tumhe mara hai.....
Kya esa kabhi ho sakta hai ki kabhi kisi bete ne apni hi maa ko mara ho......
Me mujhe bhi apne pass le chal maa.....
Plz......
Ab aur nahi saha jata yeh akelapan.......

Kuch der tak woh ladka vese hi rota raha......
Fir woh utha aur tyar ho gya aur school dress pehan ke school li aur nikal gya.......

( Ab thoda sa intro ho jaye......

Deep Verma - hero of the story jani ki main.....
"5-8" hight.....
Medium si body....
Fair color.......
Padne me bhi acha hun......
Sports me bhi acha hun......
Par mera na to koi friend hai nahi koi apna kehne wala.....
Kyu ki sabhiujh se nafrat karte hai......
Sabhi mujhe Manhoos kehte hai......
Is liye aaj tak akela hun.......
Esa nahi hai ki mari family nahi hai......
Meri bhi family hai.....
Par sabhi ne mujhe alag kar diya hai......
Kyu woh sab mujhe meri maa ka katil mante hai......
Kyu ki main "Manhoos" hun......
Han par mwoh log mujhe mahine ke mahine kich rupee bhej dete hai.....
Jis se mera guzara ho jata hai.......
Par isi ke sath me ek coffee shop pe bhi kam karta hun.......
Vahan se bhi kuch paise aa jate hai.....
Kuch log to mujh se nafrat karye hai aur kuch ke main apne kareeb nahi ane deta kyu ki kahin na kahin me bhi khud ko manhoos manta hun......

Yeh to tha hero ka intro......
Bakki ke character story me time to time aad honge......)

Aaj mera 12th ka result hai.........
Mujhe pata tha........
Is baar bhi me top karunga..........
Par fir bhi insan ke mann mein ek dar hota hai.....
Nervousness hoti hai......

Vahi sabh kuch mere under bhi tha......
Ki kahin koi aur top kar gya to......
Par mujhe is baat ke tension thi ki kahin top 3 ki ranking me mera nam nahi aya to......

Isi udhed bun mein me School pohanch gya........
Sabhi students ek bade hall ki taraf jaa rahe the.......

Jab main hall mein pohancha to hall khacha khach bhara hua tha.......
Sabhi seats book ho gayi thi.......
Mujhe kahin bhi bethne ke liye yagha nahi mili is liye me ek side khada ho gya.......

Fir kuch der baad Principal mam stage pe ayi......
Aur Mike apne hath me le liya......
Aur bolna shuru kiya........

Pp mam - mere pyare students.......
Mujhe yeh kehte hue khushi ho rahi hai ki hamare school ka result is saal bohat acha aya hai.......
Bas kuch students ko chod ke sabhi ka result bohat shandar raha.......
Aur ek sabh se nadi khush khabri ki baat yeh hai ki hamare school ke ek student ne pure state me top kiya hai......

Pure hall taliyon se gujh utha.........

Fir Principal mam sabhi ka result announce karne lagi.......

Sabhi stage pe ja ja ke apna result lene lage......
Fir ayi top three ke bari......

3rd no. Pe hamare school ki ek ladku thi......

2nd no. Bhi ek ladki thi......
Fir bari ayi no.1 position ki.....
Mera dil dhak dhak karne laga......
Kyu ki vahan hal mein ham char log the jinka result announce nahi hua tha.......

Pp mam - to students ab name hai hamare School ki shan jani ki topper ki......
Lekin yahan char log bache hai.....
Jin me se ek topper hai aur bakki ke tin student fail hai.......

Principal mam ki baat sun ke hum charo logo ke paseene chutne lagw ki akhir kon hai woh topper aur kon teen fail hai......
Par mujhe jakeen tha ki me hi top karunga........

Pp mam - to students pehle me aap sabhko fail students ke nam announce karungi.......
Pehla name hai Rahul sinha......
Dusra name hai Pulkit sharma.......
Aur teesra nam hai any guesses......

Sabhi mera nam pukarne lage.......
Aur yahan hamare dono ke paseene chut rahe the.......

Pp mam - to students teesre failure ka name hai Preet Partap Singh......
Ab aap logo ko topper ka name bhi pata chal hi gya hoga......
And the name us Deep Verma the topper of our State give big hands to him.......
Mr. Deep plz come on the stage.......

Me to yeh khabar sun kr ander se bohat khush hua.......
Fir me stage ke aur badhne laga.......

Sabhi teacher aur students mujhe kha jane wali nigaho se dekh rahe the.......

Main stage pe pohncha aur jhuk ke Principal mam ke pao chu liye.......
Principal mam ne mujhe gale se laga liya.......

Pure school me ek Principal mam hi thi jo mujh se pyar karti thi.....
Varna sabhi teacher aur students mujh se nafrat karte the......

Pp mam - congrats my boy......
Is baar bhi tum me mera sar ucha kar diya hai........
Students Deep ko pure state me top karne ki khushi me apni city ke best college me scholarship mila hai......
To ek bar taliyon se Deep ko badhai dijiye.......

Ek baar fir hall me taliyon ka shor sunai dene laga.....

Fir me apna result leke Stage se niche aa gya......
Sabhi log vapis apne apne ghar jane lage.......

Me bhi apne ghar jane laga jese hi gate se bahar nikla ki.......
Aaaacccchhhhhaaaannnnnnkkkkkkk..........

[Raguhalkal]

HI DOSTO

Ye ek copy ki hue kahani hai so pls shabashi deni hai to us shaks ko jisne ye likha hai uska naam muje be nahi pata

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.2
Jese hi me gate se bahar nikla achanak kisi me mera rasta rok liya.....

Ueh koi air nahi balki hamare school le sab se bigde hue ladke the.......

L1 - kyu be topper kaham chal diya......

Main - ghar ja raha hun bhai.......
Plz kya aap mera rasta chode ge........

L2 - kya ne itni bhi kya jaldi hai.........
Hamse apne topper hone ka gift to leta ja......

Main - bhai mujhe koi bhi gift bift nahi chaiye.....
Kya aap mujhe jane denge plz.....

L3 - kya be m*******d tujhe sunayi nahi deta.....
Tujhe rukne ke liye bola na to ruk.....

Main - dekho bhai maa gali mat do varna.....

L2 - varna kya be.....
Principal ko complaint karega......
Ja munna ja......

Yeh keh ke teeno ladke hasne lage.......

Main - dekho bhai log yeh jayada ho raha hai......

L3 - yeh ese nahi manega.....
Ise sabak sikhana hi padega.....
Teri maa ki sale.....

Woh ladka itna bol mujhe marne ke liye age badha.......
Yese hi usne mere muh pe punch marna chaha.....
Me twist karke side ho gya aur usi waqt uske pet ki left side me punch mar diya.....
Jis se woh niche gir pada aur karhane laga.......

(Mujhe ladna to nahi ata par.....
Park mein subha jab mein joging pe jata hun to vahan ek teacher apne students ko kuch karate bagera aur self defense sikhata hai.....
Is liye kuch moves mene bhi sikh liye.......)

Main - mene pehle hi kaha tha ki mujhe maa ki gali mat dena......
Par isne nahi suna ab bhugat.......

L2 bhi mujhe marne ko badha......
Par mene age badke niche baith ek twisting kick uske pero me mari.....
Jis se woh hawa me gulati khata hua niche gir pada......
Jese hi me kahada hua......
Kisi ne piche se mere sar pe kisi sakht cheez se baar kiya.......

Mujhe sar me bohat jayada dard hone laga......
Aur khoon bhi behne laga......
Jab mene piche palat ke dekha to piche L1 ek baseball bat liye khada tha.......

Jese hi woh dobara mujhe marne ko hua.....
Mene age badh ke baseball ko pakad liya......
Aur ek punch uske pet me de mara.......

Woh bhi pet pakad ke niche baith gya......
Fir mene uske face pe ek kick jad di......
Woh vahin let ke tadafne laga.......

Hamare charo taraf kafi bhed jama ho gayi thi.......

Principal mam aur bakki ke teachers bhi vahan pohanch gaye.......

T1 - kya hua yahan......

L2 - sir isne hame mara.......

T1 - kyu be ladke tumne inko kyu mara......

Main - sir ladayi inho me shuru ki thi.......
Aur inho ne mujhe maa ki gali bhi di........

Itne me Principal mam ne age badh ke un teeno ladko ko thappad mar diya......

T1 - mam yeh aap kya kar rahi hai.....
Galti us ladke ki hai......

Principal mam - galti uski nahi hai inki hai......

T2 - aap itne biswash ke sath kese keh sakte hai ki galti inki hai aur us ladke ki nahi.......

Principal mam - kyu ki me Deep ko kayi salo se janti hun......
Woh kabhi bhi jhooth nahi bolta.......
Samjhe......
(Un teeno se) dafa ho jao yahan se......

Woh teeno mujhe ghurte hue vahan se chale gaye.......
Itne me mujhe chakkar ane lage aur me behosh hone laga.........

Aur kuch hi palo mein me niche gir pada......

Principal mam ki nigha jab mujh pe padi to bhag ke mere pass aa gayi.......

Jab unho ne mere sar ke piche hath lagaya to unhe vahqn kuch gila gila sa mehsoos hua.......
Jab unho ne apna hath dekha to vahan khoon laga hua tha.......

Principal - hey bhagwan khoon....
Khade khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho......
Jaldi se ise meri gadi tak pohnchao......

Fur kuch teachers ne mujhe utha ke Principal mam ki gadi me litaya......
Principal mam ne mera sar apni goad me rakh liya......
Aur driver ko gaddi hospital lejane ke liye kaha.......

Jaldi hi hum log hospital pohanch gaye......
Mam ne Ward boys ko bula ke mujhe stature pe litaya aur ander le gayi.......

Doctor mere sar pe patti kar di......

Principal - doctor Deep abhi kesa hai......

Doc - he's fine now.....
Jayada khoon beh jane ke ki bajhe se body me kamjori aa gayi aur woh behosh ho gya.......
Agar thodi si bhi der ho jati to......
Ise bachana mushkil ho jata......
Bas kuch der me ise hosh aa jayega........

Principal mam - thanks doctor.......

Fir doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Mam vahan mere pass hi baithi rahi.........

Kareeb raat ke 8 baje mujhe hosh aya........
Mene dekha me kahin nayi jagha pe hun......
Fur mujhe medicine ki smel ane lagi me samajh gya......
Me hospital me hun......
Fir me apni charo aur dekhne laga.......
Principal mam mere pass hi baithi thi........

Principal mam ne jab mujhe hosh me ate dekha to woh uth ke mere pass aa gayi......
Aur mere mathe ko chum ke boli.....

Principal mam - ab kese tabiyat hai beta tumhari.......

Main - abhi acha hun.....
Par me yahan kese......

Principal mam - mein tumhe yahan leke ayi hun......
Tumhare sar oe chot lagi thi jisse tumhara bohat khoon beh gya.......
Aur tum behosh ho gaye.......
Fir me tumhe yahan le ayi.......
Par tum mujhe yeh bataoge ki tumne unse jhagda kyu kiya.......

Main - (bholi si surat bana ke) mam wo jhagda mene nahi unho ne shuru kiya tha......

Fur main mam ko vahan pe pe jo kuch hua sabh bata diya.....

Principal mam - chalo koi baat nahi tum yahin ruko me doctor ke pass hoke ayi......
Tumhe discharge karvana hai.......

Fir mam room se bahar chali gayi........
Kuch der baad woh room mein vapis ayi.......
Unke sath doctor bhi tha........
Fir doctor ne kuch checkup kiya aur kuch medicine bagera likh ke mujhe discharge kar diya........

[virat singh12]

More update

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.3
Fir hum pp mam ki car mein baith ke ghar ko nikal liye.....
Mene mam ko apne ghar chlane ko kaha......

Main - mam plz mujhe mere ghar chod dijiye.....

Principal mam - chup chap baithi raho......
Tum mere sath mere ghar ja rahe ho.......
Tumhare sar pe kafi chot ayi hai.....
Aur kafi kamjor bhi ho gaye ho......
Aur tum apnr ghar me akele rehte ho.......
Koi bhi tumhari dekh bhal karne wala nahi......
To ab chup chap mere ghar chalo samjhe.......

Main - par mam.....

Principal mam - (vich mein hi baat katte hue) koi excuse nahi......
Ab tum mere satg chal rahe ho to chal rahe ho.......
Understand......

Maine sirf han mein gardan hila di......
Jise dekh mam ke hotho pe muskurahat aa gayi......
Unho ne mujhe gale laga liya.....

Principal mam - that's like a good boy.....

Mam ne mujhe lita ke mera sar apni goad me rakh liya.......
Jaldi hi hum mam ke ghar ke bahar the........

Mam ke ghar mein sirf unke pati unki beti aur woh hi rehti thi......
Unka ghar 2 manjila tha.....

Ghar ke gate se enter hote hi sahmne sitting hall tha....
Uske ek side me dinning table tha.....
Aur usi side kitchen bhi tha.....
Sitting ke dusri side teen rooms the.....
Ek room mam ka.....
Dusra guest room aur third store room......

First floor pe bhi teen room the......
Ek unki beti ka......
Aur baki ke teen guest room the........

(Mam ki family ka thoda sa intro ho jaye.......

Mam's husband - Deepak Verma - age 38......
Achi khasi height hai......
Achi personality......
Nami business man.......
Apni family se bohat pyar karte hai.......

Mam - Kaveeta Verma - age 36......
Dikhne me khoob surat......
Dil ki saff.....
Inka kam hai sirf pyar batna......
Hamesha khush rehti hai.......

Mam's daughter - Preeti Verma - age **........
Bilkul cute c gudiya.......
Ek lauti beti.....
Shararti aur samajh dono ka combination hai........)

Jab ham ghar pohanche to mam ke husband hall mein ho sofo pe baithe the........

Jab unki nazar hum pe padi to woh uth ke hamare pass aa gaye.......

Deepak - Kavita kahan thi tum aaj kafi der ho gayi......
Agar koi koi jaroori kam tha to bata to deti......
Upar se phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi........

Kavita mam - sorry woh main bhool gayi thi.......
Aur phone silent pe tha.......

Fir Deepak uncle ki nazar mujh pe padi......

Deepak - ok thik hai......
Vese yeh ladka kon hai......
Tumne intro nahi karvaya.......

Kavita mam - khud pehchano.......

Deepak - ohh to challenge......
Hmmm sochne do kon ho sakta hai.......
Ahan kahin yeh Deep to nahi.......

Deepak uncle ki baat sunn me san reh gya.......
Fir mene mam ki taraf dekha jo muskura rahi thi.......
Unho ne uncle ki taraf han mein gardan hila di.......
Uncle ne bhi mujhe gale se laga liya.......

Fir mujhe alag karke bole.....

Deepak - par iske sar pe yeh patti kesi.......

Uske baad jo kuch aaj school mein hua mam ne woh sab kuch uncle ko bata diya.......

Deepak - chalo koi baat nahi......
Aao betho......

Fir hum sabhi sofo pe baith gaye......

Kavita mam - vese meri gudiya kahan hai.......

Deepak - woh abhi tak apne room mein padhai kar rahi hai......

Kavita mam - hey Ram dinner kiya ke nahi usne......

Deepak - tumhari ladli hai.....
Me to keh keh ke thak gya.....
Par woh boli ke maa ke sath hi khaungi.......

Kavita mam - chalo me bula ke lati hun use.......

Kavita mam - (ek naukar se) hariya jake Ramu se kaho woh Deep ke liye khichdi bana de.......

Hariya - ji malkin......

Fir Kavita Preeti ke room ki aur badh gayi......

Idhar Deep is soch mein dooba hua tha ki.....
Mam use itna pyar kese karti hai bakki sabhi to usse nafrat karte hai......
Aur to aur mam ke husband tak use jante hai.......
Esa kese ho sakta hai........

Udhar Mam Preeti ke room mein pohanch chuki thi......
Unho ne jake Preeti ka door knock kiya.......

'Knock Knock'

Preeti - papa mene keh diya na mujhe bhukh nahi hai.....
Fir aap kyu baar baar aa rahe ho......

Kavita mam - acha beta ji mere sath bhi nahi khaogi........

Jese hi Preet ne apni maa ki awaz suni.....
Usne bhag ke darwaza khola......

Aur apni maa ke gale lag gayi.......

Preeti - maa aap aa gayi......

Mam ne use apne alag kiya.....
Aur uska gal chum liya.....

Kavita mam - ji meri gudiya.....

Preet - to fir jaldi jaldi niche chalo mujhe bohat bhukh lagi hai.....

Mam maze lene ke mood mein.....

Kavita mam - lekin abhi to tum keh rahi thi tumhe bhukh nahi hai......

Preet - woh tab nahi lagi thi na.......
Ab lagi hai....
Ab jaldi se chalo.......

Kavita mam - lekin tumhe bhukh nahi thi......
Ab to tum surf mere liye kha rahi ho.....

Preet - to jao ab mujhe sachi me nahi khana.......

Aur usne muh fula liya.......

Kavita mam - ale ale meri gudiya to gusse ho gayi.......
Main to mazak kar rahi thi.......

Preet - jao mujhe apse baat hi nahi karni hai......
Ek to itni late ayi ho aur upar se mujhe tang kar rahi ho.....

Kavita mam - ok soly na baba....
Ab maff bhi kardo.....

Preet - nahi karungi nahi karungi....
Jao aap yahan se.......

Kavita mam - Acha to theak hai.....
To main tumhare hisse ka khana tumhare bhaiya ko khila dun......

Preet ne jese hi mam ki yeh baat suni to woh foran apni maa ki aur dekhne lagi......

Preet - maa kya sach mein bhaiya aye hai.......

Kavita mam ne siraf haa mein gardan hila di.....

Preet khushi se uchal padi.......

Preet - kya sachi mein Deep bhaiya aye hai.....
To chalo na jaldi se mujhe unhe milna hai.......

Fir Kavita mam aur Preer niche aa gaye......
Main aur uncle abhi bhi sofo par baithe the.......

Preet bhag ke meri aur ane lagi.......
Me bhi khada ho gya.....
Khushi se nahi......
Me to iss liye khada hua tha ki yeh ladki meri taraf is tarha kyu bhagi aa rahi hai......

Itne me Preet aa ke mere gale lag gayi......

Preet - mere bhaiya aa gaye.......
Mere bhaiya aa gaye.......
Ab main apne bhaiya ko kahin nahi jame dungi......(apna chehra upar karke)
Bolo na bhaiya mujhe chod ke to nahi jaoge.......

Mene siraf naa me gardan hila di......

Kyu tabhi mera dimag chal hi nahi raha tha......

Me to iss baat se hairan tha.....
Ki Principal mam ka pura parivar mujhe janta tha......


Phir jab usne mere sar pe patti dekhi to mujhe pucha.....

Preet - bhaiya yeh apke sar pe kya hua.......

Main - kuch nahi gudiya woh thodi c chot lag gayi thi......

Preet - aap bhi na bhaiya......
Bilkul bacche ho......
Bilkul bhi dhayan nahi rakhte ho apna........
Aao mere sath dinner karo aur fir apko room mein jana hai rest karne samjhe ki nahi.......

Meme siraf han mein sar hilaya.......

Mam aur uncle vahan baithe muskura rahe the......

Fir ham log dinning table pe baith gaye......

Preet - aaj me apne bhaiya ko apne hath se khilaungi.......
Khaoge na mere hath se.......

Main is bar bhi sirf han mein gardan hilayi.......

Fir Preet mujhe apne hath se khilane lagi......
Mujhe aaj tak sirf nafrat hi mili thi.....
Aaj main itna pyar sehan na kar paya aur mere ankhon se ansun nikal aye........

Meri akhon mein ansun dekh ke Preer ne mam se bola......

Preet - maa dekho bhaiya ro rahe hai........

Mam uth ke mere pass aa gayi......

Kavita mam - kya hua beta ro kyu rahe ho.......

Main - kuch nahi mam woh aaj tak mene sirf logo ki nafrat hi dekhi hai.....
Aaj aapko logo ke dobara mila pyar sehan nahi hua......
Aur mere ankhon se apne aap asun nikal aye......

Yeh sun ke mam me mujhe gale laga liya......

Kavita mam - are mera bacha.....
Bas chuo hoja.......

Itne mein Preer boli......

Preet - maa apne sahi kaha bhaiya aach mein hi bache hai dekho to kese bacho ki tarha ro rahe hai.......

Preet ki baat pe sabhi muskura diye.......

Fir hum sab ne apna dinner complete kiya......

Fir sabhi vaham baith ke bate karne lage........

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.4
Dinner ke baad hamne kuch der tak bate ki......

Isi vich mam ne mujhe dava bhi dedi......

Fir mujhe ground floor pe hi babe guest room me leja ke lita diya......
Fir mam light of karke chali gayi......
Bakki sabhi bhi uth ke apne apne room mein chale gaye........

Me raat pata nahi kitni der tak jagta raha....
Aur sochta raha ki akhir mam aur unka parivar mujh se itna pyar kyu karte hai.......

Par fir me aari bate jhatak ke so gya........

# Nayi Subha hui......
Pata nahi yeh subha kiske liye kya lati hai.....

Preet aaj sabh se pehle uthi......
Is din ka intezar najane usne kab se kiya tha.......
Uska har waqt yahi khab tha ki.....
Uska bhi koi bhai ho aur woh use pyar se uthaye.....
Aur woh sapna bhi aaj pura hone wala tha.......

Woh jaldi se uthi aur apne room ka darwaza khol ke niche ki floor ki aur bhagi.......

Par shayad abhi uska sapna pura hone ka waqt nahi aya tha.......
Woh jese hi seediyon ke pass pohanchi ki uska pair fisal gya......
Uski muh se cheekh nikal gayi......

Preet - mummmmmyyyyyy........

Aur woh seediyon pe girne lagi......
Woh ludakti hui seediyon se niche ki aur jaa rahi thi.....
Idhar sabhi ne uski cheekh sun li.....
Sabhi jaldi se bed se uthke bhage......
Main bhi bhaga......

Jab ham bhar pohanche to Preet seediyon se gir rahi thi......
Jab woh last seedi pe pohanchi to uska sar seedi ki nok se takra geya......
Uske sar se khoon nikalne laga.......
Aur woh behosh ho gayi........

Sabhi log bhag ke uske pass pohnche......
Sabhi ki ankhon mein asun aa gaye......

Kavita mam - (rote hue) gudiya beta uth ja......
Beta dekh teri mama tere pass hai......
(Uncle se) Deepak dekho hamari gudiya uth kyu nahi rahi hai.....
Us uthao plz.....

Deepak uncle ne jaldi se Preet ko goad mein uthaya.......
Aur bahar ki aur bhage.......

Bahar aake unho ne gudiya ko back seat pe litaya......
Gudiya ke sath piche mam bhi baith gayi......

Main uncle ke sath again baith gya......
Main aur aunti apni puri koshish kar rahe the.....

Jaldi hi ham log hospital pohanch gaye.......

Preet ko OT me lijaya gya......
3 ghante tak operation chalta raha.....
Fir doctor bahar aa gaye......

kavita mam - doctor neri bachi kesi hai......

Doctor - dekhiye abhi ham kuch nahi keh sakte......
Unke sar pe kafi chot lagi hai......
Aur khoon bhi kafi beh gya hai....
Is liye abhi patient ko observation me rakhna hoga......
Agar unhe kal tak hosh nahi aya to woh koma mein bhi ja sakti hai.......

Yeh sun ke hi ham sabh ki ankhon se jhar jhar ansun behne lage......
Jaldi hi Preet ko room mein shift kar diya......

Mam aur uncle uske pass chale gaye........
Main bahar hi baith gya......
Mere mann mein luch chal raha tha.......
Kuch der baad main uth ke chal diya........

Kahan pata nahi......
Bas chalne laga......
Me kuch kadam hi chala tha ki.....
Mujhe hospital mein ek mandir dikha.......

Main ja ke mandir sahmne hath jod ke ghutno ke bal baith gya.......

Main - hey bhagwan kyu likha hai yeh sab meri kismat mein.......
Jo bhi mere kareeb ata hai.....
Uske sath hamesa bura hota hai.....
Badi mushkil se koi mujhe pyar karne laga tha......
Par woh bhi jayada waqt nahi chala.....
Kyu bhagwan akhir kyu......
Meri us pyari si gudiya Preet ki kya galti hai.....
Woh to fool yesi bachi hai......
Uske sath itna bura kyu kiya......
Jo kuch karna hai mere sath karo.....
Us bachi ko bacha ko bhagwan.....
Meri gudiya ko bacha lo bhagwan......
Main vadda karta hun ki main usse hamesha ke liye door ho jaunga......
Bas meri gudiya ko theak kardi......
Meri manhoosiat ka saya uske upar na pade bhagwan plz.......
Ek baar use hosh aa jaye bas fir main us se door ho haunga.......
Plz bhagwan......
Plz.......


Idhar main bhagwan ke age prathna kar raha tha......
Aur koi tha jo meri bate sun raha tha........
Yeh koi aur nahi mam thi........

Darasal baat yeh hai ki.......
Jab mam ander Preer ke pas baithi to ek dam se unke dimag me mere bare mein aya.......
Fir mam ne mujhe idhar udhar dekha.......
Par main room mein nahi tha......
Fir woh bahar aa gayi......

Jab woh bahar ayi main unko besud sa kahin jata hua dikhayi diya......
Unho ne mujhe awaz lagai par mene nahi suna.......
Fir mam bhi mere piche aa gayi.....
Fir main mandir main chalte chalte baith gya.....

Mam bhi mere piche hi thi.....
Mam ke mujh tak pohancne tak mene apni prathna shuru kar di thi jo ki mam ne bhi sun li.......
Aur mere sath sath unke bhi akhon mein asun the......

Fir mam palat ke vahan se chali gayi......
Main bhi vahan se uth ke vapis room ke pass aake baith gya.......
Man bhi Preet ke pass hi baithi thi.......

Par unke dimag main Meri bate hi ghum rahi thi.......

Ese hi pura din beet gya......
Aur raat bhi......
Par Preet ko hosh nahi aya tha......

# Next day....
Dopehar ka waqt tha par abhi bhi Preet ko hosh nahi aya tha......

Ab sabhi ke dil ka dar badhne laga tha......
Kyu ki agar Preet ko hosh nahi ata to.......
Preet koma mai chali jati......

Dopehar ke 01:30 ka time tha......
Mam Preet ke pass hi baithi thi......

Kavita mam - beta uth ja na.....
Kyu apni maa ko tadpa rahi hai......
Beta uth ja na nahi teri mumma ki jaan nikal jayegi plz beta......

Idhar main bhi mann hi mann Preet ke theak hone ki dua mang raha tha......

Par kehte hai na bhagwan ke ghar der hai andher nahi......
Shayad yeh kahawat kisi ne sach hi banai hai.......

Mam Preet ke hath pe sar rakh ke ro rahi thi.....
Ki tabhi achanak.........

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.5
Mam Preet ke hath pe sar rakh ke ro rahi thi.......
Ki tabhi achanak mujhe kuch yaad aya......
Me utha aur hospital ke gate se bahar aya.....
Aur auto pakad ke kahin chal diya......

Kuch der baad auto kahin jake ruka......
Yahan auto ruka tha vahan ek mandir tha......

Jese jese main age badh raha tha......
Luch yaadein meri akhon ke sahmne aa gayi......

Kyu ki yeh mandir mere bachpan ki yaddon ka mandir hai......
Is mandir mein main aksar apni maa ke sath aya karta tha.......
Apni maa ke gujrne ke baad bhi main kabhi kabhi yahan ata tha.......

Jese jese main age badhta gya.....
Meri yaadein taza hoti gayi......
Aur Akhon se asun bhi behne lage.......

Main chalta hua mandir mein ja pohancha........
Aur mata rani ki murti ke age ghutno ke bal baith gya........

Main - mata rani meri maa kehti thi ki aap sabh ki ralsha karti ho......
Din dukhio ke dukh harti ho.......
Apke age jisme bhi jholi failayi hai......
Apne hamesaha uski jholi bhari hai......
Aaj main bhi apke age jholi faila raha hun.......
Mujh Bhikhari ki bhi jholi bhar do mata.....
Meri gudiya ko theak kardo......
Eh sab meri manhoosiyat ke karan hua hai.......
Jese jese main kisi ke kareeb hota jata hun........
Vese vese unke sath koi na koi hadsa hota rehta hai........
Main apse vaada karta hun ki main gudiya aur mam ki family se door chala jaunga.......
Aur na hi kosi ke kareeb jaunga......
Plz mata rani meri gudiya ko theak kar do plz mata rani......
Meri gudiya ko theak kardo......

Uske baaf main vahin fut fut ke rone laga........

Main kuch der tak vahin baitha rota raha......
Fir kisi ne mere kandhe par hath rakha.........

Jab mene sar utha ke dekha to woh mandir ke pujari the.......

Pujari ji - beta ese nirash mat ho......
Mata rani pe vishwash rakho.....
Woh sab theak karegi.......
Mata rani unki pukar jaroir sunti hai jo sunti hai jo sache dil se prathna karte hai.......
Tum apni pareshani batao......

Main - baba meri gudiya ke sar pe chot lagi hai.....
Usli halat gambhir bani hui hai......
Doctors ne kaha hai ki agar use hosh na aya to woh koma mein bhi ja sakti hai.......

Meri baat sun ke Pandit ji mandir ke andet chake gaye.......
Kuch der baadwoh vapis aye.......

Pandit ji - yeh lo.......


Itna bol unho ne ke choti si kanch ki shishi mujhe pakda de......
Usme kuch bunde tail ki thi......
Main use dekhne laga.......

Main - yeh kya hai baba.......

Pandit ji - beta yeh mata age jo jyot jalai jati uska thoda sa ghee hai.........
Ise apni behen ke mathe pe laga dena.....
Aur fir uske ankhon pe.......
Mata rani kirpa karegi........

Fir pandit ji vahan se chale gaye........
Aur main utha mata ko parnam kiya aur chal pada vapis hospital.......
Jaldi hi main main hospital pohanch gya........

Fir main jaa ke Preet ke room mein ghus gya.......
Mam abhi bhi Preet ke bed pe sar rakh ke baithi........

Maine age badh ke woh ghee Preet ke mathe aur ankhon pe laga diya........
Aur mata rani se Preet ko theak karne ki dua mangna laga.......

Fir main bahar aa gya........
Aur sheeshe se ander dekhne laga.......
Kuch der baad Preet ke hath mein halchul hone lagi........

Fir dheere dheere usne ankhen kholi........
Fir usne idhar udhar dekha.......
Mam uske bed pe sar rakh ke leti hui thi.......
Usne mam ko awaz lagai.........

Preet - (dheemi awaz mein) Mummy.......

Preet ki awaz sun mam ek dam se uth baithi........
Jab unho ne Preet ko utha hua dekha to.......
Woh bohat khush hui........
Woh uth ke Preer ka chehra chne lagi.........

Kavita mam - meri bachi tu theak to hai.........

Preet - han maa.....
Bas sar mein thoda sa dard hai........

Kavita mam - chalo koi baat nahi woh bhi theak ho jayega.......

Itne mein main doctor ko bula laya.......
Doctor ne check up kiya.....
Aur bola....

Doctor - ab apki bachi khatre se bahar hai.......
Fikar koi baat nahi.......

Kavita man - thanks doctor........

Fir doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Main abhi bhi bahar tha.......

Fir mam ne Preet se kuch der baat ki........
Uske baad mam ne mujhe awaz lagai.......

Main ander gya.....
Aur jake Preet ke pass khada ho gya........

Main - ab kesi hai meri gudiya......

Preet - main theak hun bhaiya.......

Main - chalo tum aram karo.......

Uske baad main kuch der uske pass aur baitha......
Fir nurse aa gayi aur use neend ka injection laga diya.......
Jis se use neend aa gayi.......

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.6
Preet ko hosh aa gya tha.......

Mam bhi khush main bhi khush tha.....
Uncle ko bhi hamne is bare mein khabar kar di thi......

Ab waqt aa gya tha.....
Mera bhagwan se kiya vaada poora karne ka......
Mam ki family se door rehne ka vaada........
Yahi sab sochte hue main chair se khada hua aur chal diya bahar......

Main bahar aa ke.....
Hospital ke bahar uske bagal mein ek park tha.....
Main usme ja ke baith gya......
Aur apni jindgi ke bare mein sochne laga........

Kya jindgi hai meri.....
Na khud kisi ke kareeb ja sakta hun aur na hi kisi ko apne kareeb ane de sakta hun........

Akhir mera kasoor kya tha bhagwan.......
Is se acha to mujhe janam hi nahi deta bhagwan.........
Kisi ke sath kuch bura to na hota........

Main yahin sab soch raha tha ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe hath rakha.......

Mene palat le delha to mam thi......

Kavita mam - kya hua yahan kyu baith gaye aa ke........

Main - bas unhin.......
Apne ghar jane ka waqt ho gya......

Kavita mam - kyu mera ghar tumhara ghar nahi hai.........
Kya ham log tumhare apne nahi hai.........

Main - esi baat nahi hai mam.......
Bas main khud apke pass rehne ke layak nahi hun.......

Kavita mam - kyu esa kya hua.......
Jo tum hamare sath rehne ke layak nahi ho........

Main - hai koi vajha......
Bas aap mujhe jane dijiye.......

Kavita mam - bina vajha bataye to main tumhe hane bhi nahi dungi........

Main - to theak hai suniye......
Main manhoos hun......
Meri hi vajha se gudiya ko itni chot lagi......
Meri manhoosiyat ke vajha se meri maa mujhe chod ke chali gayi......
Meri hi manhoosiyat ke vajha se mene apne ekloute dost ko kho diya......
Ab mujh mein kisi ko khone ki takat nahi hai........
Shayad yahi meri kismat hai....
Sab se alag rehna......
Aur na hi meri kismat mein pyar hai....

Itna bolte bolte meri akhon se ansun aa gaye.......
Aur main uth ke jane laga......

Par mam ne mera hath pakad liya......

Kavita mam - kis ne kaha ki tum manhoos ho......
Jo sab hua woh hadse the........
Tum unki vajha nahi ho.......
Sab apni apni kismat hoti hai.......
Kisi ki kismat mein kuch likha hota hai......
Aur kisi ki kismat mein kuch.......
Jaroori nahi hai ki ham khud ko uska karan mane.......

Main - mam aap isliye keh rahi ho ki aap mujh se pyar karti ho.......
Par mujhe pata hai ki yeh sab meri manhoosiyat ki vajha se hua hai......
Aur fikar mat kijiye main vich vich mein gudiya se milta rahunga.......


Uske vaad mein main jane laga to.fir se mam me mera hath pakad liya.......

Main - mam plz mujhe jane dijiye.......
Apko meri kasam......
Mujhe bhagwan se kiya vaada bhi pura karna hai......
Nahi to meri gudiya par fir se koi musibat aa jayegi.........

Kavita mam - agar tum chake gaye to main gudiya ko kya jabab dungi.....
Ki uska bhai kahan hai......

Main - gudiya ko bol dijiyega ki main kisi kam se bahar gya hun.....
Aur main us se milne ata rahunga......
Chalta hun mam......
Mujhe maff kar dijiyega.....
Agar koi galti ho gayi ho to......

Uske baad main vahan se nikla aur apne ghar ki aur chal diya.........
Mam bhi uth ke mere piche ayiaur hospital ki aur chal di.......


Main jaldi hi ghar pohanch gya......
Ghar pohanch ke maine darwaza band kiya......

Aur charpai pe baith le fut fut ke rone laga.....
Jab dil gubar thoda halka ho gya to main utha aur cofee shop ka dress pehan ke nikal pada apne kam pe.......

Cofee shop pe pohanch ke mene apni hajri lagvai.......

Itne mein manager mere pass aya.......

Manager - kyu be kamchor teen din se kahan tha.......

Main - sir mere sar pe chot lag gayi thi.....
Khoon kafi beh gya tha.......
Jis ki vajha se kamjori aa gayi thi.......
Is liye kam pe nahi aa paya.......

Manager - to kahabar tera baap karta.......
Kam se kam kahabar to karni chahiye........
Kam na dham hai koi.....
Bas kam chori ke bahane hai......

Main - dekhiye sir mere pita ji ko kuch mat kehna.......
Mujhe chahe kuch bhi ke lo.........
Varna acha nahi hoga.......

Manger - dekho bhai log.....
Ek to kamchori upar se dhamki bhi deta hai......
Haram khor......
Karle jo karna main to ese hi boluga.......
Tere baap ko kya tere pure khandan ko boluga......
Gande khoon ke gandi pedaish.......


Manager ki bato ne mere ander gusse ki ek chingari jaga di......
Main ek punch banaya.....
Aur us manager ke muh pe de mara........
Manager upar uchala aur ek pass pade ek table pe ja gira.......
Manager ki chodi chingari usi pe bhari padi........

Main - sun be manager......
Agar age se kisi ki family ke bare mein esa vesa kuch bola to mein tera woh hal karunga ki teri saat puchate yaad rakhengi......
Uske baad main vahan se nikal ke vapis ghar aa gaya.......

Cofee shop mein koi tha jo yeh sab dekh raha tha......
Aur uski ankhon mein ansun the........


Fir main ghar mein aya....
Kapde change kiye aur charpai pe baith gya......

Mere hath mein meri maa ki tasvir thi.........
Aur akhon mein asun the.........

Main - maa main kya karu........
Kyu mera esa naseeb likha gya.......
Mene kisi ka kya bigada hai........

Main ese hi rota raha.........
Aur kab meri aakh lag gayi......
Pata hi nahi chala......
Uske baad meri aakh subha hi khuli........

Main utha aur joging ke liye park mein aa gya........
Kuch der tak joging ki......
Uske baad thodu bohat exercise ki......
Uske baad maine karate class ko dhayan se dekha.....

Aaj fir gate se tin logo ki entry hui.......

Aaj bhi unki bate mere dil ko chubi......

Ldki1 - yeh manhoos aaj fir yahan.......
Acha bhala do din se gayab tha........
Aaj fir apni manhoos shakal dikhane aa gya......

Admi - kou baat nahi beta.....
Kisi ke liye apna mood kharab nahi karte.......

Par aaj ek kamal ki baat thi.....
Ldki2 shant thi.....
Fir main vapis ghar aa gya.......

Ghar aake main ne dress change kiya.......
Aur apne liye chaye nashta banaya......
Fir gudiya se milne chal diya hospital.......

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.7
Main nashta karke ghar se hospital ki aur nikal gya.....

Main abhi ghar se kuch hi doori pe tha ki......
Ek ball ludakti hui sadak pe aa gayi.....
Aur ek 3-4 saal ka baccha bacha uske piche bhaga aa raha tha......
Aur usne ball ko rok liya aur vahin sadak pe khelne laga.....
Itne mein ek tez raftar car ayi jo bekabu ho gayi thi......

Aur driver us bache ko side hone ke liye horn bajane laga......
Par bacha vahin khelta raha......
Itne mein horn ki awaz sun ke meri nazar us car pe padi.....
Pehel to mujhe pata na chala kyu aakhir yeh car wala horn kyi vaja raha hai.....
Par jab meri nazar us bache pe pade to....
Mera dil dehal gya.......
Car bache ke bohat nazdeek aa gayi.......
Main bhag ke us bache ki aur jane laga.......

Gaddi bilkul bache ke pass thi.....
Jese hi gaddi bache ko touch hone wali thi....
Main us bache ke pass pohanch gya.......
Aur use utha ke side mein kud gya......
Main dusri side us bache le ke palti khata hua dusri aur pohanch gya......

Woh car bhi age badhti rahi.......
Mujhe kuch kharoche ayi par bacha bilkul theak tha......
Par woh rone lag gya.......
Itne mein bache ke mata pita bhi bhag ke hamari aur ane lage......

Aur udhar woh car ek truck se takrane wali thi.....
Woh truck wala ne gaddi ko delh dusri aur cut mar diya......
Car wale ne bhi cut mara........

Idhar truck over load hone ke vajha se control ke bahar ho gya......
Aur udhar car ke driver ne bhi control kho diya.......
Car jake ped se takrayi........
Car walo ko kafi chot ayi........

Idhar us bache ke mata pita bhi us bache ki aur aa rahe the..........
Aur udhar us bekabu truck ne bache ke mata pita ko takkar mar di.......

Truck Bhi out of control tha.......
Aur woh bhi aage jake Ek transformer se ja takraya........
Aur usi waqt usme blast ho gya.......

Main bhi us bache ke mata pita ke pass pohanch gya......
Fir
Woh kafi jakhmi the....
Mene kuch logo ki madat se unko auto mein bithaya aur hospital ki aur chal pada.......

Jaldi se ham log hospital mein pohanch gaye.......
Main ne unko icu mein pohanchaya.....
Fir main us bache ko leke gudiya ke room ki aur badh gya.......

Mujhe mam bahar hi mil gayi......

Main us bache ko leke mam ke pass gya......

Kavita mam - kese ho Deep..?

Main - theak hun mam......
Aap kese ho aur gudiya ki tabiyat keai hai.....?

Kavita mam - main bhi theak hun......
Aur gudiya bhi theak hai......
Tumhe yaad kar rahi hai....
Kal kayi baar puch chuko hai....
Bhaiya aye ke nahi......

Main - theak hai main abhi mil ke ata hun.......

Main us bache ko leke room mein jane laga.....
Itne mein mam ne mujh se pucha......

Kavita mam - beta yeh bacha kon hai.......

Main - yeh bacha to mujhe sadak pe mila hai....
Iska accident hone wala tha......

Fir maine mam ko jo kuch bhi hua bata diya.....

Main - mam is bache ko aap apne pass rakhiye......
Agar mera saya is par raha to yeh bechara anath ho jayega......
Pehle hi mera manhoos saya is bache pe padne ke karan ek ghar to tabha ho gya.......
Aur teen bakki hai......
Plz mam aap ise apne pass rakhiye.......

Itna bol mein Preet ke room mein ghuss gya........
Mam mujhe kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi......
Par maine suna nahi.......
Main sidha under ghuss gya.........

Under Preet bed pe baithi thi.......
Aur nurse dava le ke kha rahi thi......
Main age badhne laga.......

Preet davaiya leke relax hui.....
To uski nazar mujh pe padi.......
Us ke chehre pe muskan aa gayi.......
Par dusre hi pal usne muh fula liya aur dusri aur fer liya......
Main uske pass gya ayr bench pe baith gya.........

Main - kya hua gudiya gussa hai mujh se.......

Par gudiya ne koi jabab nahi diya.......

Main - hun to hamari gudiya hum se sachi mein naraz hai.......
Hona bhi chahiye......
Bina bataye jo chala gya tha........

Itna bol main gudiya ki aur dekhne laga par is baar bhi uski aur se koi bhi jabab nahi aya........

Main - main bhi kya karta gudiya.......
Meri bhi majburi hai.......
Mujhe college bhi join karna uski tyari karni hai.......
Kal job chodi hai......
To nayi job dhundni hai.......
Plz maff karde na.......
Tu jo saza degi mujhe manjur hai........

Main chup ho gya aur gudiya ke jabav ka intezar karne laga.......
Par is baar bhi no reaction........

Main - chalo theak hai to tum mujhe saza nahi dogi to main hi khud ko saza deta hun........
(Main sochne laga) unnnnnnnnn
Kya karu......
kya karu.......
Han kan pakad ke uthak baithak karta hun.......


Aur main apni yagha se khada hua aur side mein aa gya.......
Aur apne kan pakad liye......
Aur laga uthak baithak karne.......
Aur sarh sath ginne laga........

Main - 1....2.....3.....4.....5.....6.....10......15......20.......

Iske age main uthak baithak nahi kar saka......
20 uthak baithak mein hi meri halat patli ho gayi......
Kyu ki sar pe chot lagne ke karan body mein abhi bhi kamjori thi.......

Main - gudiya ab maaf bhi karde.....
Dekh ab to maine uthak baithak bhi kardi........

Par gudiya ne koi reation nahi diya......
Woh meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi thi.......
Darasal asal baat yeh thi ki wph muh fer ke bina awaz ke hass rahi thi.......

Main - acha theak to ab main apne oo aur saza deta hun.........
(Main fir se sochne laga) unnnnmmm kya karu.........
Han apne hath upar karke bench pe khada ho jata hun..........

Main hath upar karke vahan pade table pe khada ho gya.........
Main takreeban 20 se 25 minutes ese hi khada raha.........
Ab mere hath bhi dard karne lage the........
Maine hatg niche kiye aur table se niche utar ke khada ho gya.......

Main - gudiya ab to maaf kar do......

Par usne koi reaction nahi diya......

Main - plz gudiya kardo na maaf......
Acha chalo mein apne apjo aur saza deta hun.......
(Ek baar fir sochne laga....)
Unnnmmmmm kya karu......
Han idea.....(mann mein) is se gudiya jaroor maan jayegi........
(Preet se) to theak hai gudiya jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi karti tab tak main yahan tumhare sahmneurga banke rahunga........

Itna bol main pero ke bhar baith gya.......
Aur apni tangi ke niche se apne hath nikale aur jhuk ke apne kan pakad liye.......

Main - delh gudiya ab to main murga ban gya......

Is baar gudiya ne meri taraf dekha.....
Par fir se muh fer liya.......
Maine murge ki awaz nikali........

Main - kuk duk doooooo........

Jis se gudiya ka control chut gya aur woh jor jor se hasne lagi........
Aur boli........

Preet - bhaiya aap murge bange.......
Aymur bangh bhi dedi.....
To ab anda (egg) bhi de dijiye......
Hahaha

Main - yeh to duniya ke sab sw mushkil kam hai gudiya yeh to.......
Woh pain ke upar kacha pehne wala Spider man bhi nahi kar sakta.......

(Sorry spider man bhai agar bura laga ho to......
vese agar maan bhi jaoge to kya kar loge hamara mazak tha don't bhi serious......
Sade hue makde)

Meri baat pe gudiya ek baar fir se has padi........

Preet - chalo ab apna yeh drama band karo aur khade ho jao.......

Main - tumne mujhe maaf to kar diya.......

Preet - ham baba kar diya.......
Ab khade ho jao.......

Main jese hi khada hua to gudiya boli......

Preet - hmm yeh hoi na good girls wali baat.......

Main - ( be khyali mein) thank you......

Par jab mujhe gudiya ki kahi baat dhyan se yaad ayi aurapni galti ka ehsas hua to.....

Main - gudiya.......

Ek baar fir gudiya has padi aur apne kaan pakad liye.........
Mere chehre pe bhi muskan aa gayi.......

Fir gudiya ne hath ke ishare se mujhe apne pass bulaya......
Main jab uske pass gya to usne apni bahen faila di........

Preet - mujhe meli huggi chahiye jaldi se do.......

Usne yeh baay bilkul ek masum bachi ki tarha kahi.......

Main - ahan to meri angle ko huggi chahiye.......

Preet ne han mein sar hila diya......
Maine age badh ke Preet ko gale laga liya......

Fir maine Preet ke mathe ko chuma aur us se alag ho gya......
Aur fur usse bate karne laga........

[Raguhalkal]

Update No.8
Main jese tese Preet ko manaya......
Fir uske pass baith gya......

Preet - bhaiya aap mujhe bina bataye kyu chale gaye the........

Main - gudiya bataya to tha ki majboori thi.........
Acha batao ab tumhari tabiyat kesi hai.......

Preet - main theak hun bhaiya........
Kal ja parso chutti bhi mil jayegi.......

Main - yeh to achi baat hai......
Chal ab mujhe yeh bata ki tu seediyon se kese giri......

Fir Preet ne use us din ki sari baat batayi.........

Preet - maine socha tha ki agar aap na uthe to thoda masti karke uthaungi......
Par us se pehle hi yeh sab ho gya.......

Main - oho to yeh baat thi......
Meri gudiya plan karke ayi thi.......

Preet ne muskurate hue han mein sar hilaya.......

Main - chal koi baat nahi......
Agli baar try kar lena.......

Preet - (masoom sa face banate hue boli) par ab to apko sab kuch pata hai......

Main - meri pyari c gudiya tere liye kuch bhi.......

Phir hum log luch der ese hi baate karte rahe.......

Kuch der baad mam us bache ko leke ander ayi.......

Preet - maa yeh baby kiska hai.......

Kavita mam - beta ise tumhare bhaiya laye hai.......
Iske mummy papa ka accident ho gya hai.....
To unka operation chal hai........

Mam ne us bache bed pe baithate hue bola........

Fir gudiya us bache ke sath khelne lagi......
Woh bacha bhi uske sath jaldi hi ghul mil gya.......

Maine mam ko side mein bulaya........
aur hum bahar aa gaye.....

Main - mam plz aap iske mata pita ke operation ke paise de dogi......

Kavita mam - kyu nahi beta.......

Main - theak hai mam......
Baad mein aap mujhe bill bata dena main apko paise de dunga........

Meri baat sun ke mam palat ke vahan jane lagi.......
Unki akhon mein ansun the........
Mujhe yeh bhi pata tha ki yeh hoga.....
Ki woh mujh se naraz ho jayegi.......
Maine unko rokte hue kaha........

Main - kya hua mam........
Meri baat to suniye......

Kavita mam - tum jao yahan se.....
Mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni.......
Aur han bill ki bilkul bhi fikar mat karna main pay kar dungi.......

Main - mam plz meri baat to suniye......

Par mam to meri koi baat nahi sun rahi thi......

Main - mam apko ko meri kasam ek baar meri baat to sun lijiye........

Kavita mam - kaho kya baat hai......

Main - mam meri ghar se mere pass kafi paise ate hai har mahine.......
Is liye woh bas bank mein pade sad rahe hai......
Woh mere kam to ate nahi.....
To meri jagha is bache ke kam to aenge.......


Meri baat sun mam meri aur palti......

Kavita mam - to main konsa parai hun.....
Main bhi to tumhari apni hun......
To fir tumne mujhe paraya kyu kar diya........

Main - nahi mam esi baat nahi hai......
Main apko dukhi nahi karna chahata tha......
aur na hi main aap pe bojh banna chahta hun......

Main mam se yeh baat bol hi raha tha ki.....
Meri piche se awaz ayi.......

Awaz - kis ne kaha ki bache maa baap pe bojh hote hai.......

Maine palat kar dekha to piche Deepak uncle khade the......

Main - nahi uncle mera woh matlab nahi tha.......

Deepak - beta bhale hi tum hame apna na mano par hamne to tumhe apna beta hi mana hai......
Aur to tumne yeh kese soch liya ki tum ham pe bojh ho.......

Main - (sar jhuka ke) sorry uncle sorry mam.......

Main unke dil apne liye apna pyar dekh kar us pyar ko sehan nahi kar pa raha tha......
Meri akhon se asun beh nikle........

Mam ne age badh mujhe gale laga liya.......

Kavita mam - chal chup hoja.......
Vaar ladkio ki tarha rone lagta hai.......

Main - mam akhir kyu aap log mujh se itna pyar karte ho.......
Bakki log aur mere parivar wale mujh se nafrat karte hai........
Meri hi manhoosiyat ke vajha se gudiya hospital mein hai.......
Us bache ke mata pita icu mein hai.......
Un car walo ka pata nahi kya hua.......
Aur us truck wale ke ghar mein to matam chaya hoga......

(Dosto main pehle bhi bata chuka hun ki woh truck age jake transformer se takraya tha......
Aur vahin blast ho gya tha......
Aur uska driver bhi usi blast mein mar gya tha......
Yeh baat maine dobara se is liye likhi hai taki kuch readers ka doubt clear ho jaye.......
Kyi unko lagta hai driver ja to kho gya aur jinda bach gya.......)

Main - yeh sab meri manhoosiyat ki vajha se hua hai..........


Kavita mam - beta maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha ki.......
Hadse kisi ko bata ke ja kisi ki vajha se nahi hote........
Maine tumhe pehle hi kaha tha tum manhoos nahi ho......
In sab ke sath jo kuch hua woh tumhari vajha se nahi hua.......
Yeh to unki kismat mein likha tha to ho gya......
To yeh baat apne dimag mein bitha lo ke iski vajha tum nahi ho samjhe.......
Then now be aa brave boy......
Chalo chup ho jao aur apne asun pohncho......

Deepak uncle - Kavita sahi keh rahi hai Deep......
Toh apne apne karamo ka fal hota hai......
Koi yahin dharti pe bhogta hai to koi bhagwan ke pass chala jata hai........
Is liye kabhi khud ko blame mat karo........

Main - main karu uncle main chah ke bhi yeh sab nahi bul pa raha hun......
Yeh sab kuch ek dam meri akhon ke sahmne hua hai......
Us sab ko yaad karte hi meri ruh tak kamp jati hai.......


Kavita mam - chalo esa karo pehle chup ho jao.....
Aur fir bathroom jaker apna muh dho ke ao........

Maine vesa hi kiya.....
Aur phir vapis se mam ke pass aa gya.......

Itne hamare pass ek inspector aya aur uske sath do hawaldar bhi thi......

Inpector - ap me se woh kon hai jo us admi aurat ko yahan laya hai jinka accident hua hai........

Main - ji main laya hun......
Ji kahiye.......

Inspector - mujhe apja byan lena hai......

Main - ji puchiye apko jo kuch puchna hai........

Inspector - to bataiye yeh sab kese hua.........

Maine inspector ko sabh kuch bata diya jo kuch bhi maine delha tha......
Inspector ke sath aya hawal dar sab kuch likhne laga........

Use likhne ke baad usne mere sign liye........

Inspector - mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki aaj ke waqt mein apne kisi aur ke bache ke liye apni jaan jokham mein dali......
Varna aaj ke time mein to bhai bhai ka nahi hota......
Aap theak waqt pe unhe hospital bhi le aye nagi to vahan pe to bas bheed tamasha dekhti.......
Aur un dono ki vahin tadaf tadaf ke apni jaan nikal jate......
Apko selute karne ka dil kar raha hai......

Uske baad woh inspector mujhe selute karke chala gya.......
Aur jata hua keh gya......
Ki agar unhe agar age is case mein meri madat ki jaroorat padi to woh mujhe bula lenge........

Uske baad mam ne mera hath pakda aur mujhe pass mein pade bench be baitha liya........
Aur fir mujhe bench pe lita diya.......
Aur mera sar apni goad mein rakh liya......

Unki goad mein mujhe sakoon mil raha tha.......
Jese meri maa ki goad mein milta tha.........

Kavita mam - dekha beta maine kaha tha na ki yeh aab karmo aur kismat ka khel hai.........
Us bache ke mata pita ne jaroor punya kiye honge tabhi to unki jaan bach gayi.........
Us truck driver ne jaroor kisi ka bura kiya hoga......
To use uske kiye ki saza mil gayi........
Aur un car walo ne bhi kabhi na labhi kisi ka bura kiya hoga.........
Chalo chodo in bato ko tum aram karo.......

Uske baad mam mere sar mein unglia ferane lagi.......
Aur mujhe kab neend ayi pata hi nahi chal........
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