All In One THE DARK SIDE SAGA Part-2
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(07-03-2017, 12:02 PM)arav1284 : Lagta hai ek adhuri story ko complete karne ka mera ye pryaas readers ko pasand nahi aa raha, na to koi comments aur na koyi like ..?
Mai likhna jaari rakhu ya story close kar du..??
Aapke comments ke baad he story aage badhaunga ..
(07-03-2017, 03:56 PM)urc4me : Aab tak to do comments hi aaye hai aur dono hi achchhe hai. Aap nirash na hove aage badhte rahe. Mazedar kahani likh rahe ho.only 2 comments..!!
(07-03-2017, 05:36 PM)arav1284 : Ab tak aapne padha..
jyo hi uska nanga badan mujhse chhua mere rom rom me currunt doud gaya...
Ab aage...
tabhi uska hath mere land se takraya usne foran apna hath hata liya...
main us se baate karne laga, chunki hamare sharer aapas me touch the to mera land khada hone laga, jo use bhi mehsus ho raha tha
tabhi unse mujhse kaha ki tum mere saath kuch aisa vaisa to nahi karoge na...??
maine anjaan bante huye kaha aisa vaisa kya..!!
to usne kaha jo ek aadmi aurat karte hai...
maine kaaha kya sidhe sidhe batao..
to usne kaha chudai..
maine kaha agar tumhara man ho to kar lunga.. aur agar tum mana karo gi to nahi karunga..
to wo kehne lagi ki uske pati ko mare 3 saal ho chuke hai, kaiyo ne use patane ki koshish ki par usne aaj tak apne ko havas ke bhediyo se bacha ke rakha hai..
maine kaha ki dekho milti choot ko koi chhod de to wo to bewkuf hi hoga..
par tum majburi me mere saath is haalat me ho, aur maine aajtak kisi ki majboori ka fayda nahi uthaya hai ,
aur aaj tum mere sahare ho to bina teri marji ke main aisi koi harkat nahi karunga, aur agar neend me galti se hath lag jaaye to mafi de dena
tum puri nishchint raho main khusi se choot marta hu par kisi ka faida nahi uthaya aaj tak..
wo bahut hi prabhavit ho gayi halanki mera land puri tarah tan chuka tha,
kafi der hum baat chit karte rahe idhar land saala apni aukat pe aye bina maan hi nahi raha tha
kuch der maine adjust kiya par mera man bekabu hone laga tha
maine apne land ko hath me liya aur use hilane laga wo boli ye tum kya kar rahe ho..??
to maine kaha thand bahut lag rahi hai to sharer ko garam kar raha hu
gita boli ye to galat baat hai..
maine kaha ha par abhi aur koi chara bhi nahi hai.. aur jor se land hilane laga..
wo boli aisa mat karo
to maine apna hath land se hata liya aur us se thoda aur chipak sa gaya
ab mera land uske chutado pe ghis raha tha use chutad bahut hi mulayam the, use bhi ye pata tha par wo ignore kar rahi thi
tabhi maine pucha itne dino se bina chude kaise rehi ho tum..!! kya man nahi karta..??
to wo boli shuru shuru me dikkat hoti thi par fir Ab aadat ho gayi hai... kabhi jyada hi jor uthta hai to ungli se hi khud ko shant kar leti hu..
par kisi paraye mard ki taraf nahi gayi..
maine kaha agar koi paraya mard tumhare pass aa jaye to..?? …………
usne kuch jawaab nahi diya
maine apna hath uski chochi pe rakha aur us se kaha ki ..dekho aaj mosam bahut hi ghatak hai ye purani rajai kuch khas garmi nahi de payegi, agar tum raaji ho to kyon na hum ek dusre ke sharer se thodi garmi prapt kar le..??
to wo boli main samjh rahi hu ki tum mere saath karna chahte ho..
to maine kaha isme galat kya hai..?? aur fir maja to dono ko hi mileega na, maine uski chochi ko halka sa daba diya..
usne kaha par ye galat hai, wo saali kabu me hi nahi aa rahi thi...
ab hum dono khamosh the main lagatar uski choochi ko sehlaye jaa raha tha, uske nippals me tanav aana shuru ho gyaa tha, rajayi ke andar taapman badhne laga tha
wo boli mat chhedo mujhe..
to maine akhri daav khelte huve kaha ki agar wo mujhe use chodne de to main use 2000 rs dunga..
par wo boli main aise aurat nahi hu...
miane uski choochi ko ab puri tarah dabane laga tha, uski awaaj me ladkhadahat aani shuru ho gayi thi
maine kaha 3000 usne na kaha to maine kaha ki theek hai, main tujhe 3500 rs dunga aur tere ghar ko thik karne me madad bhi karunga,
aur uska jawaab sune bina hi uska hath apne land pe rakh diya..
saalo baad usne land ko apne hatho me feel kiya tha, chaah ke bhi wo apna hath na hata saki..
maine kaha dekh bhagvan ne agar moka diya hai to use cash karle, apne tan ki aag bhuja le, isme tera faida bhi hai,
aur uski choochi ko kas ke bheench ne laga, uske muh se aah nikli..
main samaj gaya tha ki yahi sahi time hai hathoda marne ka...
(07-03-2017, 08:03 PM)dpmangla : Dear, Read this Thread Today n Just now only. Good Continuation n Thanks for taking this Stalled Story Forward n Hopefully u will complete it also.धन्यवाद .. उत्साहवर्धन के लिए..आप पाठकों की सराहना एवं सुझाव से मुझे कहानी को और आगे लिखने का हौसला मिलता है।
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